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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - NJamicus on September 11, 2009
    It appears I was mistaken. Ron's not a bastard. The story doesn't stop getting more and more interesting)
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  • From ANON - NJamicus on September 11, 2009
    Ron's such a bastard!
    Well, you said about more sex but I think that something like that is better then sex scenes.))))))))))
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  • From ANON - NJamicus on September 10, 2009
    Perfect as ever) Wish you inspiration)
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  • From ANON - NJamicus on September 09, 2009
    It's simply perfect))))) 'No more doubt, no more fear... There's a new day that it's bringing. Something simple is the key. Only love will set us free'))))))))))))))))
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  • From ANON - NJamicus on September 07, 2009
    Yeah, this part's rather sad. Poooor Snape...
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  • From ANON - NJamicus on September 07, 2009
    Sooooooo touching. The scene of Harry asking Snape to forgive him. And the whole fic is so emotionally full and so easy to read that I've been reading all night long and I've been crying almost all that time. It's a masterpiece))))))) You're a very talented author.
    (it's not like spam... well I was listening to Akiko's "Love Theme from Spartacus" while reading... the song matches the fic a lot))
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  • From helga1967 on August 22, 2009
    Exceptionally awesome. I cried and loved it
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  • From helga1967 on August 20, 2009
    Wow excelent and marvelous. I loved
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  • From ANON - Stiby on August 17, 2009
    (I re-send the review because I think the other never arrived)

    Good morning Emily. My name is Stiby, I
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  • From Elisabetta611 on August 14, 2009
    Hello Emily!

    I found this story on a Rec page after reading Cambiare Podentes. And I'm so glad I read it. I was up all night, crying, hoping, smiling, laughing.... Such an incredible story line. JKR's Happily Ever After (Voldie = Dead equals "All is fine", I doubt it!) always left me with a void that your story filled. All I was missing was Severus' canon love for Lily, that would have made it even more angsty! :))

    But what an amazing tale you have woven. I was spellbound and am still reeling from the experience. Thank you so much for restoring my faith in slave fics. (Mesmerizing as it was, Cambiare left me with a bitter taste in my mouth) Please keep writing, I'm addicted!

    Fondly,
    Elisabetta
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  • From ANON - Amelia on July 30, 2009
    For someone who has just been repeatedly raped, Snape seems pretty low key about it. I mean even he would be a bit disturbed by something like that. I'm not critising your story because its brilliant and I stayed up all night reading it but I would have thought he'd have a bit of nervous breakdown after what he's been going through and still experiencing. Poor Severus. I shall continue to read some more tonight.

    Amelia x
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  • From ANON - Rin on June 17, 2009
    I've just read Ashes of Armageddon. It is the best Snape!slave fic I've ever read. The characters are so livid and beautifully written that I was almost hoping to live their lives forever)) The idea of grounded to dust horcrux permeated to Harry's soul got me ((( I thought there wasn't any hope for both of them. But you managed to create a miracle - trustworthy happy ending)) Thank you very much!
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  • From ANON - C on May 27, 2009
    This is like nothing I've read before. The story is wonderful precisely because you finished Book 2, and didn't end with "well, it wasn't really your fault that all of those events happened" and the Killing Curse. The themes of this story are powerful, and the characters and descriptions convey them perfectly.
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  • From ANON - xanderfan on May 12, 2009
    Hi, I don't usually review on this website, no material has ever captured my attention so immensely and I just couldn't finish and not tell you what an amazing job you did. It was beautifully written, excellent plot and and a very original idea. To be honest, I usually read Harry as the bottom in a relationship but this is so excellent and completely believable. I can practically see Harry becoming this person, there are no outlandish character changes, everything is purely believable. I can see Severus being the resilient person, you've portrayed him to be, headstrong and willful while hiding his emotions beneath a contempt-like sneer. I can also imagine him breaking, the tension becoming to much, crass appearing in his strong persona, just wanting to lay down and die. I want to say so much more but everything can be concluded in one simple sentence. You are an amazing writer and you managed to capture me into this brilliant story, a feat not many authors can do. Now that I've reviewed as requested, I am going to scour some of you other stories, hopefully unearthing more gems such as this one.
    Loved the story, loved the writing,
    Sammie
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  • From ANON - Tofu_gal on May 05, 2009
    I just read the entire thing from beginning to end. It was a really beautiful story (really dark at first though). Loved it overall, keep up the good work!
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