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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From Ellanath on June 30, 2008
    ooooooooo I just loved the last sentence!
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  • From ANON - cravedom on June 30, 2008
    Oh man, I did not think Tom would have awareness; does he? Well either it will be interesting to see how Harry responds. Poor Severus does not know what he wants anymore one minute he turns himself in thinking that Harry will turn his sickness to others and the next he is trying to goad Harry into killing him. Severus is under such pressure that I find amazing he is even able to have coherent thoughts, the physical pain is one thing but the horror of knowing what Harry is and the lack of hope has to be overwhelming.

    Poor Hugo, I wonder what he is thinking right now and after observing Lee
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  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on June 30, 2008
    Oh, my. And if Harry is killed by killing Snape (Unbreakable Vow), there may be enough of Tom for him to survive in Harry's body.
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  • From Neinka on June 29, 2008
    I have so much thoughts ...And my english is so bad that i cant tell you much....But what i can is pray. Really...I beg you for good ending(at last for Severus?...Please? No?..Ok..*sniff*)......I know..I know... you probably have already "end" of this story....
    Aaah I must stop babbling......
    Ok so ...Yours story is the most "purest" slavefic i ever read and thank you for it!(Bad end or good end :) )

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  • From Mizzfreestyle on June 29, 2008
    Will Harry ever snap out of his "power high"?

    I love this story so much. I just clicked on it randomly one day and now I wait eagerly for each and every update. So please, put my out of my anxiety and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Fairner on June 29, 2008
    o.o this chapter was so hard for me to read >< i was wincing when harry started with the knife. i wonder if severus is trying to remove tom by calling him up from inside harry erg does that make sense? um maybe harry will be i don't know awake or something arg i can't type it T__T well i cant wait to know what happens next =P
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  • From ANON - hobgoblinn on June 29, 2008
    This is an absolutely stunning story. I signed up for your yahoo group to be notified of updates, and I hope it works. I have read this straight through at one sitting, unable to tear myself away from it. What I like most here is your Snape as someone with same snark and dignity as before, but with an emotional depth and capacity for real love that was missing in canon. Look forward to more soon. Excellent work.
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  • From KillingProphet on June 29, 2008
    You are by far one of my favorite authors... Oh lord update soon.. Please?
    KP
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 29, 2008
    I absolutely loved Severus' last line.
    After all the torment he just went through, he still had enough muster for that. Amazing.
    update!
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on June 29, 2008
    noooooooooooo!!!!!! please don't let Harry go. give him a chance to fight. give me some hope. lol
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  • From ANON - Laura on June 29, 2008
    Ahh! All of your chapters leave me wanting to read more. Your Dark Harry left me shivering. I can't believe I'll be at camp for a month- but maybe when I get back the story will be finished! I'm going to end up checking for it before I say "hi" to any of my friends, I swear.
    I feel like Harry can never recover from this... which is sad. So, yeah, I feel like he'll have to die for there to be a happy ending. But a part of me just wants Severus to convince him to be good again...
    I may end up crying if there's a sad ending. I love your writing style.
    ~Laura (Hazel Love back at the other site)
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  • From callistianstar on June 28, 2008
    Not "Taking it easy on you this time"? Wonderful. -__- It is scary to think that everthing before was just intro torture 101. I spit out an "oh shit" the moment I read the first time that he was "fully awake". I was actually thinking and hoping that he would get knocked out soon from being awake for too long and would spend a few days sleeping while his pain tolerance returned.
    "Tom"? Well seeing as I'm certainly not expecting for "Tom" to answer..."well...hello"... I can only assume Severus is trying to get killed.
    The nail thing? That was very sadistic, and perhaps cool isn't the right word, but it was a very "fitting" addition, from Harry's pov. I'm just glad he didn't rape him or poke his eye out with it.
    I read everyone else's reviews for theories. Whitehound's sounded really good about the Dumbledore thing. Although I would always assume, Albus has to have made a "conscious" decision. There is something I'm missing obviously. Because, if he is trapped, why does his portrait not remember?....So many questions. Looking forward to your next chapter...with Severus alive?
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  • From Aufie on June 28, 2008
    More, more! Please more! And soon! *froths at the mouth*
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  • From Visitkarte on June 28, 2008
    Gosh! He dared! He called him Tom! Countdown on!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 28, 2008
    Probably one of the most horrifying things you've ever written Emily. And yeah, I screamed. That was hard to read, but like a car accident, I couldn't turn away. Snape is so right this is NOT Harry..this is Tom and I hope he, Hermione, Ron, or Neville figures something out soon. He needs to be put down.
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