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By : emilywaters
  • From emilywaters on June 25, 2008
    cloudshape: Wow. Good guesses! Most of them, spot-on. I promise I won't abandon the story.
    THe ending is already in my mind.



    cravedom: Giggles wasn't quite the reaction I was going for in the last chapter, but I
    guess that's what you get when you deviate into the grotesque and bizzare!



    Luvdonite: I appreciate that you care for Harry, and I am glad you do - because at this point,
    I myself am pretty pissed at him, to the point of wanting to murder him in the story. Anyways, it was
    not my intention to portray the new trio (Ron, Hermione and Neville) as traitors or cold-blooded murderers.
    I mean, they've been trying to help Harry and reason with him for FIVE years. As a reward, he punched Ron and nearly
    sent Neville to Azkaban just for trying to write an article. They've tried all the medical and
    magical ways. But now, he's torturing an innocent person to the point of insanity and will likely create
    a Horcrux anytime so that he could kill Snape unpunished. I don't think the decision to fight to the death
    was reached easily or lightly; at least it was not my intent to portray it this way. What else could they do, now
    that there's almost nothing of Harry left, and what's left is Voldemort's personality living in his body?
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  • From ANON - Fairner on June 25, 2008
    o.O that's brilliant! Nevil polyjuiced into George! lolz can't believe Harry didn't notice!...or did he? XD can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on June 25, 2008
    they better not hurt my Harry. those traitorous bastards! Despite them saying that they care and love Harry, they sure reached the decision to kill him really quick.
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  • From cravedom on June 24, 2008
    I was doing all kinds of wiggling and giggling and other things that are undignified and may also end in ggling while reading this. I have not been this excited since I saw the previews to The Secretary. I love that you follow a logical creative line (is that an oxymoron?) I am having a ball trying to figure out everything that is happening and have all this guesses that I can
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  • From ANON - cloudshape on June 24, 2008
    I have been following this story for a while yet, but usually don't review. Well, this is getting better and better and I just have to let you know how much I admire your style. This is so wonderfully dark (although I very much hope you will have a happy-ending eventually). The characters are perfectly in-character and the story is believable and full of surprises. The moment when Harry strokes Severus' hair after the gangrape and how Severus almost gives in was absolutely heart wrenching. I love that you let him keep as much dignity and pride as possible in this hell.
    You seem to like your reviewers guessing, so I'll venture a few guesses as well:
    - George will help Severus, either by himself or bring him to Ron/Hermione/Neville
    - Harry is acting so weird because Voldemort's soul fragment inside him hasn't died and now starts to take control of him
    - no clue what happend to Dumbledore's soul or portrait, but can't wait to get a few clues; howewer, I don't think it's something he did to himself
    - when all of this is over and Severus as well as Harry are saved, they will get together eventually; Ginny will come back, but not live with Harry anymore (I don't think I'll be too happy about that, I'd rather see Ginny with Harry and their child and have Severus get over his feelings for Harry and find someone else with whom to be happy - but so what, it's your story and I'll love it either way!)
    - Hagrid is together with his brother, they may have gone to the tribe where his brother grew up
    - Neville and Luna will be together again, as soon as all of this is over
    Just never abandon this story please and keep up the frequent updates. Oh, and could you at some point have Hermione comfort/cuddle poor Severus? Just friendshipewise of course - no sexual touch to it (as if poor Severus would need that right now!), but I so love the more intimate moments between them. And although Severus is a very strong person, he shouldn't be able to recover to quickly after this ordeal is over, it's just to extreme what he had (and maybe will have?) to go through. I'll look daily for the next update.
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  • From Aufie on June 23, 2008
    Dark, so utterly dark and I'm hopelessly addicted. I absolutely love your style of writing; intelligent, thoughtful and measured, it flows along beautifully. I really admire how accurate the characters appear, despite being twisted into such different contexts. I've read several of your stories so far and will undoubtedly be reading more. I'm not sure exactly where this story is heading, although i have a few ideas I think I will stop trying to second-guess you and will just let it unfold. I've got a feeling I might be surprised! You're a very talented writer, and I very much look forward to further chapters. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - LadyJayVee on June 23, 2008
    How can Harry ever make it right with Severus? Why doesn't Severus think death is more preferable than living life as a slave? So many questions. Can't wait to see where it goes. Wonderfully intense. I'm guessing Neville had a talk with George and that George is taking Severus to Hermione and Neville. Time will tell. Thanks for such a wonderful story.
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  • From redcrusader on June 23, 2008
    Please, please, PLEASE tell me that George is so sickened by what just happened to Sev that he's taking him to Ron and Hermione....Normally I like rape scenes; I'll admit...sometimes they kind of get me off. But I just felt so bad for Sev! I mean, Harry's gone completely off his rocker. Instead of being angry at him though, I'm more concerned. I'm curious now more than ever as to what exactly happened to him. I can't wait for the next update. I hope we start getting clues! That said, the latest chapters (21-23) have been awesome (for lack of a better word) and I've been grateful for the fast updates. =)
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  • From Maybe on June 23, 2008
    Poor Severus. First leaving the only people who stand up for him and than a gangrape. Can't believe the reluctant George will add more to this. Can't, can't.... Getting scared though..

    My compliments on your writing again.
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on June 23, 2008
    My gods... well, you did warn us. I wonder if Harry, if he ever gets his conscience back, will ever be able to live with what he did? And Severus, he's really going through hell. I hope Hermione's "Anything" doesn't come too late for him.
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  • From minijo on June 23, 2008
    So very dark and so very well writen, both Dark Harry and Severus.
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  • From Visitkarte on June 23, 2008
    Sick. Definitely. But rape is sick, anyway. Just what did George tell Harry? I somehow think maybe, just maybe, he could do the opposite of it? Because he seemed to be more then reluctant.
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  • From ANON - Fairner on June 23, 2008
    o.O i just finished my hw and found many chapters! yay a present for finishing my hw lolz. but yeah i hope the old friend nev visited was george and got sliped a potion that blocks out harry's hypnotizing thing...so yeah....^___^ also where in the world has hagrid gone to...has he gone off to live with norbert? lols that'd be funny.
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  • From ANON - BarkingShadow on June 23, 2008
    wow

    this fic is awesome! You're a great writer. I really hate seeing Harry act this way... it's so heart breaking. Please oh please let it be a happy ending *puppy eyes*

    write more... fast!

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  • From KillingProphet on June 23, 2008
    -Glares at the computer screen- What do you mean thats the end! Update... damn you -Glares even more at the computer-
    Update soon :)
    KP
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