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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From Leentjef on June 21, 2008
    post sooon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Biggi on June 21, 2008
    Great written chapter again, you asked your readers on fanfiction.net a few chapters ago, if they want to know about the ending, they could write you, I did just that, and never received an answer, I know you are very busy with writing so quickly, but if it
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  • From Maybe on June 21, 2008
    My, what a story. I love angsty Snape-story and this one is more than angsty. Great work!

    I really admire the psychological aproach, that is more scary than just psychical. The notion that Snape only supported the light because of a slave bond is off in my opinion, even now Severus has his own feelings. His support must come partly from himself. I almost shudder what his submission will do to him. If this story will have a happy end (and that's a big if) I hope that the road to recovery will be written too. If not in this story, perhaps a sequel then?? Next to angst-Snape I like hurt/comfort best ;-)
    You make me wonder, since Harry didn't die the horcrux of Voldemort is inside him? Is that the reason he's so evil? How does he influence everyone? Dumbledore can't be reached with the stone of the painting? Can he possibly live and is Hagrid with him? When will the friends find out what happened. How can they help Severus?
    Hope to read more soon...
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  • From cravedom on June 21, 2008
    Wao, I was unable to get to the pc for a few days and now got to read three chapters in a row! It is so awesome to hit that next chapter link
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  • From ANON - seachange on June 21, 2008
    I've been reading this story from the beginning and think it's one of your best written fics. I can't help but wonder where you're going with it, however. Many reviewers wonder about whether Harry can change, or how you'll change him, even *if* you'll change him, etc. But I really think that Snape is the more difficult one. What you're putting him through is so completely soul destroying, especially when, as far as Snape in concerned, it was virtually no time (no awake time) between his years of intense stress spying on Voldemort, another year of incredible stress with no one to confide in but a portrait, and then he goes to Harry. And Harry is putting him through this incredibly damaging abuse (emotionally, especially). So I just don't see how Snape can come through this believably intact emotionally, no matter whether you change Harry, kill Harry, or what.

    I know you like hurt/comfort and angst, but the deeper the hurt, the harder it is to recover from it, and this emotional abuse is really deep, especially given that Snape was already in a very stressed out and relatively fragile place emotionally. I'm very interested to see how you handle this.
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  • From Visitkarte on June 21, 2008
    Sigh... So much promises there, so total absence of love... So much heather... But hey... Don't they say, heather is just the other side of love? I still hope beyond hope...
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  • From Leentjef on June 21, 2008
    wow keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on June 21, 2008
    OH YES!!! Call me a sicko...but that was just freakin' Hot Emily : ) I love the you write slavery....even when the characters are not willing.....this story just got 10 times more interesting and it was already enthralling to began with....Poor Severus....he would have been correct to answer yes to showing that Muggle girl mercy...but he's so self loathing he doesn't even see the nobility in his own actions. I'm loving him more and more...and why does Harry as a cruel sadistic Master totally rock my world? I still hate the bastard, but damn he's sexy here : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 21, 2008
    Harry is so fucking out of his mind and at the same time for some reason this is hot. I feel awful thinking so since Severus seems to be trapped in a living hell but there it is. Draco was wonderfully pitiful and unfortunately in character here and I hope Harrry really doesn't plan to hold him for 20 years, I'm not even sure he could last that long. He just seems so fragile. I am glad that Sev stepped up for his godson, but what an awful way to save a life. He's done so much for so many and now this...if and when Harry realizes what a nutjob he's being he's gonna feel like shit and I can't wait, even though I suspect he really can't be blamed for acting like a sadistic ass
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  • From Visitkarte on June 21, 2008
    Oh, God... Draco did it. Instead of helping Severus he'll be the nail on his confine...
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  • From ANON - magic on June 20, 2008
    I feel sorry for Severus! I hope they find what's wrong with Harry soon. You wrote that the memories of the portrait comes from behind the veil, could his absence of memories be like to why Albus didn't appear with the resurection stone? If that's the case, it means something happen to his soul.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 19, 2008
    @Ch. 19. That sucks! Dumbledore's portrait doesn't remember anything, not even his slave? This is bizarre, I don't think Dumbledore forgot though, I think something more sinister is going on..why else would Harry be going to King's Cross all the time. We've got to find Dumbledore! And why did Hagrid just disappear? Are they all in the same place? I hope Ron finds out something. This is becoming a mystery of epic proportions....so sad to hear McGonagall doesn't appear happy but who could be with Harry turning out the way he has....
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 19, 2008
    At Ch. 18 How sad for Sev. I loved Hermione's theory that he would have gotten Harry to duel him to have the same outcome. That makes perfect sense! You did it again, twisted canon to make more sense than canon did : ) And thank god for Neville. Sorry to hear about him and Luna not getting on...I wonder what really is happening..you think Luna really would rat them out to Harry? Ron is funny...and it's hot thinking that he can sing and play guitar....interesting Harry can too...I really want to hug Sev though...Harry's a bastard.
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  • From Visitkarte on June 19, 2008
    Oh my... Dumbledore WANTED TO FORGET? I'm still buffled...
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  • From ANON - deedee10 on June 19, 2008
    wow! this is really coming along; great job!
    PLeASE keep writing
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