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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - tribebohemian aka liz on June 01, 2008
    i don't usually care for evil!harry stories. but i find this premise well thought out and intriguing. i think a cold, methodical harry is far more frightening than a mad and emotional harry. i am dying to know what has happened to twist harry this way. and even though i absolutely love snape, i'm enjoying a somewhat twisted happiness at watching him be so tortured by one he himself tortured for 7 years. looking forward to more. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 01, 2008
    How chilling was that last line:
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  • From alleycat88 on June 01, 2008
    Even though Snape HAD to kill Dumbledore the bond won't acknowledge that Dumbledore told him to? That does suck...And especially with Harry being evil incarnate. It must be hard for Hermione and Ron when they know that. Thanks for updating!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 01, 2008
    Oh shit!! that last line...wow. Harry is that far gone huh? This chapter really was something..Sev was bonded to Dumbledore? That makes perfect canon sense....as usual you find a way to explain canon events so that they could have been canon themselves! Hermione crying for Sev was touching...and whoa about Harry getting darker every month and year. What a good point about Tom and friends...I just hope he has them in the end before they get sick of him, have to kill him or he does something to them. Can't wait to hear what went down with Ginny ...
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 01, 2008
    Wow I never expected Hermoine to name thier son because of Severus. Will Severus be actually able to keep that nail since it can be considered as a weapon

    I just realized this is the first story I have ever read where it is Harry's friends who believe that Severus is innocent and not Harry.
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on June 01, 2008
    OK, now that the sentence is complete....how sad but I do appreciate the dialogue between Sev and Hermione. It's refreshing after Sev's time with Harry. Hermione and Ron may be his mental saving grace in this tale. So sad they are holding off on the wedding to wait until Harry returns to normal. I just hope they aren't waiting in vain :(
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on June 01, 2008
    You have to finish this! the last word in the sentence got cut off! Wow Victor Hugo's story makes so much sense here.....that's deep, but then we wouldn't expect any less from Hermione would we? : )
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  • From ANON - Midnight Rain on June 01, 2008
    Awesome chapter! Poor Sev! Did Ron and Hermione even notice his hand or did they not just say anything? It's getting so interesting! PLease update soon!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 01, 2008
    I am really digging this story. It's really good.
    update!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 01, 2008
    Oh wow those last two chapters were surely something else. Your story is taking me in for one hell of a ride. The changes between Harry's kindaness and cruelty is just wow. Keep up the great work with all those twists
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 01, 2008
    @Ch. 6-I'm SO glad he finally found out who died on the side of the light. Hugo is cute and I'm glad he brought Sev some laughter, however brief it was. And DAMN at the whole Ginny situation. I wonder what happened? I bet she saw some things or experienced something at the hands of Harry that sent her running for her and son's life. She even took Kreacher? Sounds absolutely frightening...I can't wait to hear what he did to cause that. And awww...Sev gets to go back home at least to pack, I hope he brings something useful to defend himself despite what Harry ordered.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 01, 2008
    @Ch. 5 Harry is freaking me out a bit. And he's right, him being kind is sort of more unnerving than any curse he can hurl. I wonder if he's dealing with a split personality situation or if he's really being intentional and conscious about everything he's doing. There is some hope since "a shadow of regret" crossed his face...but I sort of want to see how far he takes it, but the other part of me wants Sev to be as comfortable as possible and get out of this quickly...but then the story would be over..and that's no fun,lol. Go Ron and Hermione, once again to the aid of the underdog. I love the way you always weave them in your stories...OK, off to read Ch. 6
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  • From abbicee on June 01, 2008
    Harry seems so normal this chapter, even nice. It's hard to believe he's the same man who threw unforgivable curses at Severus to get him to write lines. And why lines? It hardly seems very tortuous except for some writers cramp. Or is Harry playing a more subtle game? Is he trying to brainwash Severus into believing that he really is guilty of all that Harry says he is? But that would mean that he thinks Severus believes he was on the side of the light and therefore might be innocent. . . hmm, I think I'm thinking about it too much, I'm getting a brain cramp. Harry just needs intensive therapy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From alleycat88 on June 01, 2008
    Poor Harry...hearing those things almost makes you feel sorry for him. But I really want to know what happoened to make Harry evil like this! When do we get to know?! Haha I know you though...this story will be well on its wayt before you even hint as to why Harry is like this...*sigh* Thats why I think I love you. Ecxellent chapter. Imk glad we finally got to know who died and how the Malfoys are doing. Cant wait for more!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 31, 2008
    Snape is right...Harry is crazy. He scares me. I truly do feel for Snape. A powerful Harry gone psycho is not a pleasant sight...*shivers* Thanks for updating.
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