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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - Sirin Black on January 17, 2009
    wow that was awesome :) ..and thanks for not killing off Harry :D
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  • From ANON - Sirin Black on January 17, 2009
    oh ya! Ron grew a back bone, lol i loved it..wish i could see it on the big screen :D love this story
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  • From ANON - Jessi on January 17, 2009
    I thought the story was terrifying and wonderful at once.
    Although maybe I'm prefer Harry dying...

    Well done!thanks!
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  • From toads70 on January 15, 2009
    :( poor Sev..but i'm loving this story!
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  • From ANON - Stiby on January 14, 2009
    Hello!!
    I'm from Spain, and a friend (Named Andra) has recomended this history to me.
    I have been reading it at fanfiction.net and yesterday I read the last chapter that is publish there.
    Them I have been searching it for continue, and I've trouved it here.
    This history its so genial, original, new, and i dont know... my english is so insuficient to describe it. Sorry. But it's SO GOOD, really.!

    I hope that this review could be read whithout so much effort. I know that my english is not the best of the word... Sorry about that.
    And thank you for write so original story, really.
    I've like so much when sev must write the sentence whith his blood it's.... OMG!! genial!!

    Kisses. Sorry about my englisH.
    I'll return. I promish!
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  • From ANON - Roni on January 13, 2009
    well this story is now one of my favorites to read! lol
    youre a very talented writer! im so happy you didnt off harry
    this version was outstanding lol
    ive been reading proof of life without the knowlegde of you
    as its creator and that story has me mesmerized as well
    this story had me staying up till 3 in the morning
    just to read more lol and P.O.L. im starting to get a little antsy
    waiting for the upcoming chapters 0=]
    well i cant wait [literally lol] to read more of P.O.L you are now one
    of my favortie authors good luck with your other projects
    biiezz `roni
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  • From ANON - Lolo on December 29, 2008
    Wow! I can't believe the story is finally finished. Longest one I've ever read. I loved every bit. For what it's worth, I'm glad you didn't stop halfway through.
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  • From ANON - kris on December 26, 2008
    This was an amazing story. Great job on everything. I can't think of a single thing for you to improve on or that I didn't like or understand needing to happen with the plot. Excellent writing. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Ginnyvere on December 21, 2008
    wuuuah, that's a really nice ending :D
    Couldn't imagine how it would have been if you'd killed Harry ^^ so ... my thanks to your beta *grin*

    And thank you for this great story (: reading was a lot of fun (well, for the first part "fun" might be the wrong word... but I enjoyed it all the same, superb writing!)

    Hmm ... can't think of anything else to write ... just love your story ^.^


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  • From ANON - RussianWitch on December 19, 2008
    Yay!!! Love the story great to finally have it all!
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  • From cravedom on December 18, 2008
    Well, Wao. I am sure you would like more than just wao but it needed to be put in writing.

    This was a huge project and I admire your dedication. The story had an almost unsurmauntable amount of injustice, pain and cruelty dished to a defenseless character. It was necessary of course have a lot of time and kindness given to that character if a reconciliation was to be possible. How were you brave enough to undertake the task, I don't know but it is great that you did.

    I understand why you wanted Harry to die. It made sense and I remember that in the first part I hoped Neville would. The problem is that most of us expect a happy and will bitch and whune until we get it.

    The story had enough twists and turns that Harry's 'little dust problem' became a distant memory to me. Evidently that was not the case with the characters of the story and that was also a good, we know not everybody is as good as Hermione. What a remarkable woman!

    Your stories get more complex with time and while they are still orderly and logical they are also now showing us the not so nice side of characters that make them easier to relate to. There are also those characters and or moments that completely change the dark mood and make us full of hope. I am of course refering to Hugo, the child was such a ray of light that it was almost obsene to think he had at some point been near the Harry of part I.

    Then there is Neville, I have said much about him before. He was such a remarkable character in the book and gets so little credit. We all felt sorry for the way Harry was treated as a child; but what about Neville? His parents were killed too and we know his grandmother was not the nicest woman. However this young man persevered and was brave and strong when it was needed. You captured that in this story and I loved it. Hurray for Neville!

    Enough now, you don't need a play by play. The story was great, your writing is wonderful and full of details. I will be waiting for the next story.
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  • From ANON - Jess on December 18, 2008
    Hey!! I've just loveed your story!!! My friend and I have been following it since before book 1 was completed, so its been a long journey.. Every time it was updated, we'd be like.. "OMG, Ashes has been updated!! And such and such part was so sad/perfect/awesome!!" So thanks for a WONDERFUL fabulous story!!
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  • From ANON - AngelMary89 on December 18, 2008
    I enjoyed the roller coaster ride of this story. Severus' character development was hard at times to read, but in the end it was worth it. I thought that the other HP characters were portrayed accurately. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing style and plot. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - rose on December 17, 2008
    I greatly enjoyed your story. It was so well written and different. I grew attached to Harry and Severus as well, so I understand why you didn't want to kill Harry. To be honest I am happy that you didn't. I think that after everything they deserved to have an happy ending. Thank you for sharing your story and I have enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - xinfidelx on December 17, 2008
    Absolutely, without a doubt, one of my top favorite stories I've read this year. I checked for this everyday to see if it was updated. You've pretty much been placed on my top list of writers to watch out for.

    I'm sad to see it end, but it couldn't have been a better placed or more well done ending. Thank you for finishing it.
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