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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From abbicee on May 28, 2008
    I'm guessing that little temper tantrum of Snape's is going to cost him, but I also guess Harry had plans on hurting him anyway so I suppose it doesn't matter. Earlier Snape asked what his rights were, will Snape have any rights other than the fact Harry can't kill him without causing his own death? Can't wait to see just what Harry has planned in the next chapter. Hmm. Somehow that last just didn't come out right.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 28, 2008
    Ah yes and I believe the story of where Harry saw that look will be an interesting story. Well that was an unexpected list for the things that Severus should be punished for. Now that smile at the end spells pain for Severus doesnt it. I am both looking forward and dreading the next chapter, I hope Harry doesnt hurt Severus too much
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  • From ANON - 'mnstr on May 28, 2008
    damn woman!!!!

    that is all
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 28, 2008
    OMG..Harry is positively and dangerously creepy in this so far. I love how he's not really showing all of his cards or even being outright abusive and angry. The scariest type of sickos are the still quiet types. I feel so bad for Severus, he's going to pay big time and most of it he doesn't deserve. I hope Hermione and Ron or someone will intervene before Harry takes it too far. I can't wait though to see how Harry plans to go toe to toe with his former Potions instructor. What was up with the shower scene? Did Harry conjure those thoughts of Lily in Snape's head..it was absolutely creepy to picture Snape opening his eyes after thinking about her to see Harry staring at him with a smirk....how wicked is he? I guess we'll find out soon....
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  • From alleycat88 on May 28, 2008
    Harry is super scary in this fic! You do it so well! Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 27, 2008
    I didnt expect Hermoine to be the one who was keeping Severus in a coma. I really think there is more reason as to why Harry became that way, looking forward to finding out why
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  • From abbicee on May 27, 2008
    I have a weakness for slavery stories, especially if Snape is the slave. I love the first two chapters and can't wait to read more. I'm curious what Severus meant when he said this was his penance. Did he mean that Dumbledore set this up for that or that he accepted this as his penance? In both cases I can't help wonder why? Hope to read more soon.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 27, 2008
    Poor severus....and Harry is evil. :( I love it though! More please!
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  • From ANON - 'mnstr on May 27, 2008
    EW, you continue to amaze and enthrall your readers.
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  • From dominique1 on May 27, 2008
    i like but i hate that harry is going to hurt sev
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 26, 2008
    @Ch. 2 Penance indeed. That really sucks that it went down like that. Thank goodness Hermione believed in him and kept him asleep...I can't stand Percy's azz....The forehead? Harry sounds pissed...:::shudder:::
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  • From Cathartesaura on May 26, 2008
    ooh, this looks interesting - I'll be excited to read more. I wonder where Harry learned about masterless men? Well, thanks for sharing.
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  • From cravedom on May 26, 2008
    Back at it again! MMM this one sound delicious, Snape slaved is always hot. Harry makes a sweet slave because he is so young and pure and has a good heart. Snape is a different matter. Imagine being able as a young men to own an adult that made your life miserable while growing up, having the power for once. Is a dream come true!!! And if the dream comes with a tall body and a sexy voice, then we just call it perfect.
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  • From ANON - hey.hey.monkey on May 26, 2008
    Great plot line, I am once again enjoying some nice snarry from you... the plot seems interesting once again it doesnt seem wuite as morbid as a few of the others however it is just the beginning. It seems good, i cant wait until the next chappy. oh and THANK YOU for posting soooo often!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 26, 2008
    That is a rather interesting start. Now just like Severus I wonder where Harry has seen that look before and what made him that way now
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