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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From TheSiner on December 17, 2008
    Good job! I am proud of you. Everyone who finishes a long story like this becomes my hero.
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  • From TheSiner on December 17, 2008
    Good job! I am proud of you. Everyone who finishes a long story like this becomes my hero.
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  • From ANON - isadax on December 17, 2008
    thank you for this beautiful story. And for not killing Harry.
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  • From ANON - greywalker999 on December 16, 2008
    I honestly can't find the words to do this story any justice...at all. There were so many pieces that fit, that made me gasp, come close to tears and smile in contentment like Severus did in the end. (Which was a wonderful and just right) You developed each of the characters, faults and all, beautifully and managed to bring me personally on another level of understanding with them, there's nothing that shows off a writer's talent more than their ability to bring the reader on the same emotional ride as the characters. I enjoy your writing so much, I look forward to more. Thank you for sharing your work.

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  • From ANON - moma on December 16, 2008
    Well.We're here at last.From the very beggining, back in may ,I've been delighted with this beatifully written story.It has keeping me company all this months, hoping to find a new chapter every night I happened to be in the internet. Your Severus is really wanderful and very believable.I'm not good at reviewing, but I'd like to thank you very, very much for your story and also for being magnanimous enough to share it with all of us.
    I've already start Proof of Life.I believe I' d like it asa much as Ashes.Go on and my best wishes for the New Year.
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  • From ANON - louise_oblique on December 16, 2008
    Absolutly excellent, really enjoyed it.

    Take care
    louise
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  • From ANON - Elise on December 16, 2008
    I love your story ! I have read it in three days and after I have waited the next chapter with impatience !
    I'm sorry for my english but I'm french and if I can read in english it's more difficult to write in it.
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  • From Leentjef on December 16, 2008
    hey

    first i am glad that you didn't killed harry, i very much like you storyline and the way it is writen.
    i love harry and serveus and their relationship and now at the end whit Al.
    this was a very good story and i would have been a very angry reader if you discide to not finish it.
    so i am gradefull that you did, i like the end and the epiloque and i will thake a look at you next stories
    so keep up the graet work and keep on posting

    bye bye

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  • From ANON - Lionessmon on December 16, 2008
    I have loved every minute. This is a fantastic fic and one of the best slave fics I have read. I am looking forward to Proof if Life.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on December 16, 2008
    AH so it finally ends, I've got mixed feelings about this. I'm happy to see that they now have a happy life and yet its sad to see that this story has finally come to an end. It truly has been a great read
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  • From ANON - Fairner on December 16, 2008
    aw that's the end T_T wonderful story glad i stuck to the end!
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  • From callistianstar on December 16, 2008
    Wonderful wonderful job with this story. I'm so glad Harry didn't die. Really. It was a really sweet way to end this tale, a small conversation between Al and Severus. I was a little worried that Albus was worried, feeling like he had something clawing at the edges, but I'm rather glad with how Severus assuaged his fears. I like how he did that too, talking about Ginny's love for him. And yay! Even the Cockatrice had babies! Awesome job tying up everything (not in a bow, but a happy ending nonetheless). I sort of like how you decided to end with Dumbledore as we already got the definite quality of H/S in the last chapter. You are fantastic. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2008
    I completely and totally loved your story. I even loved it through all the tears I shed for poor Snape, I was reading the whole thing expecting him to die at any minute.
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  • From ANON - anon on December 15, 2008
    Sob - story over. Loved it.
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  • From ANON - hobgoblinn on December 15, 2008
    I have followed this story since seeing a rec on the yahoo group loose canon. Though usually slash, and the kind of torture present in the first half are not my thing, I continued to read and be impressed with the scope of your story and how well you were handling difficult and sensitive material. The things that strike me most now looking back are how you characterized Neville (hidden depths of courage and ruthlessness, carried forward at times by fierce loyalty), the understated friendship between Severus and Hermione and the conspirators in part 1, and now the way you have brought the series to a close with Severus articulating for young Al the same truth that was such an underlying part of canon-- the protection that comes from a mother's love, and here, love in general. It's a testament to how well you handled these characters that even though I cannot really buy Severus and Harry as lovers, I can buy everything else about this universe. Really well done indeed. Thanks for sharing it.
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