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Reviews for Unexpected

By : Phreakdom
  • From Persy on January 15, 2022

    HOT AF!!!!!


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  • From catysmom1028 on October 31, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From LaBibliographe on June 08, 2008

    I was captivated from the first paragraph and I loved that MacGonagall managed to outsmart Snape and force him into an event he would absolutely hate! Draco clinging rather unnaturally to his father made me smile. I like those stories. Dunno why because I write Lucius as het, but there you are. That Malfoy clan is very dysfunctional.

    That is typical Ron in bludgeon mode. But it's nice that Harry fell into a good relationship and will be honoring Cedric. I'm so relieved Ron isn't with Hermione. What a mismatch, even in canon.

    Hermione wore that siren's outfit for a reason I surmise. Was MacGonagall in on corraling Snape to the party to help Hermione? Hah, I love Snape's comment to Hermione's question asking if he was with someone, "Not so far this evening." Lovely. Ooh, I like that they both are so direct about where the evening is going. No circumlocution, just getting on with losing the extraneous clothing.

    They certainly know how to entertain each other. Perhaps having a history together was enough of an ice-breaker. It appears that Snape may not be so anti-social in the future.

    Sweet, hot one-shot with both characters actually staying canon to me. I'm glad Severus lived in your AU.
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  • From Jilliane on May 30, 2008

    Thanks for letting me know you posted!

    To be truthful, although I don't mind het, I find Snape/Hermione to be the most improbable pairing ever. I am just not a Hermione fan and never will be. Having said that, this was very well written, nice and steamy and playful, and Hermione aside, I did enjoy reading it. I did like that you brought out a different side to her character, even if it still didn't make me a fan of hers. I admire a well written story, even if I don't personally care for the character, so I still say Well done!

    Please keep alerting me to all your postings; I really do enjoy your writing!
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  • From neelix on May 26, 2008
    oooh nice!!! I really liked this!!!
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  • From Angie30 on May 26, 2008
    Oh that was certainly very erotic and extreamly hot!
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