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By : ilke

From ANON - gabby1234 on September 10, 2008
It did hurt. And it was wonderful.
oh my goodness ~sighs~ that was such a beautiful line i was smiling the whole time i was reading this chapter. to freakin awesome i love how well their written i mean that is exactly what Hermione would do and honestly that's how I always pictured Draco (the only sleeping with six people part) in my head draco and hermione look different emma is okay and tom's really not my taste (sorry to offended anyone) but in my head picturing my dramione doing these things oh man it is awseome and it makes me smile and it is great!!!!!!
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From on September 10, 2008
Yippee!! I'm so so glad you updated - i think this is the best Hermione/Draco story that i've ever read - seriously! i ADORE this story - i can't believe it took me this long to come across it :) As for this chapter i just love how you described the tension between the two & how it's slowly driving them both crazy with desire *laughs evilly* ;) Anyway please please update again soon :) Loves you,
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From Scarybearhair on September 10, 2008
Chapter 1

Oh wow, that was an emotional beginning. Poor Draco losing both his parents like that and finding out his father was a monster. I feel for him. Obviously Hermione does too. I am looking forward to seeing what happens. Draco may say this changes nothing, but they both will have it seared into their memory from now on. They have both looked past the fa
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From ichiruki on September 06, 2008
LOL, I'm glad you don't mind that I pick up on the funny! I always wonder if it seems I'm coming off too jokey because I think most people in my neck of the woods have a time with us playful types always finding the little things greatly amusing (though that's why I always imagine why Dumbledore was always so twinkly in the eye department, it's that whole playful nature thing). ;) That said, for this chapter I caught myself snickering and then agreeing with the following:

"She thought about the other girls he had slept with. She thought about Pansy. And she thought that maybe she understood Pansy a little more than she had before. And that really bothered her."

Seriously, there's nothing like finding you actually share something in common with someone you hate besides that the whole mammal "that breathes air and needs water and food to survive" thing, like "Omigosh, we share feelings!!! But she's nuts and evil! We can't share feelings! Ewww! I share feelings with whorezilla!" (well fanfic Pansy is what I'm referencing, I'm thinking cannon wasn't depicted so whorishly, LOL!)

I mean, under the right conditions with the right person, thinking husbandy-goodness here, I don't mind feeling like a wanton slut, and all "yes please do come take me you wickedly delicious man" (I mean, they do make many flavors of chocolate topping these days including: dark chocolate, Irish cream, mocha, and white chocolate raspberry). I mean, if you can't get your strumpety-tart on, then what's the point really? It's like "whip cream with the cherry on top feeling" but you know, on your boobs or, um, else where. ;) Anyways I thought it was funny in that aspect. You have sex crazy hot sex, you're going to start understanding other people's motivations to act a certain way or *gasp* how they might feel, even if you still don't agree, or *gasp* (lol) find that you feel the same things and uncomfortably so. ;) Anyways please keeping inspiring us with your wonderful story! I am so loving it. :D

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From ANON - hopefaithlifelove on September 06, 2008
I really like 'Claiming Hermione'. The characters are extremely believable, realistic, and lovable. I mean, yes, they're a tad ooc, but hello! It's a fanfic! What else could we fanfic lovers expect? I can't wait for the next update! I hope it comes soon!
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From ANON - kismet510 on September 06, 2008
I have read a lot of Dramione stuff, but I can honestly say that this is my all time favorite. The first chapter is just so powerful, I can't help but get attached to your Draco. Ch 23 is beautifully written, and really still stays with the story. Often authors can't make the transition to smut from writing everything else and keep the flow of the story, but I think you did a great job. Also, your characterizations are perfect. I love love love your writing and I am a huge fan of this story and can't wait to see more. :)
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From 13Secrets on September 06, 2008
Alright, this is Smartgirl13w. Just changed my name. Great story still!
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From Smartgirl13w on September 05, 2008
Awww, that was a really sweet post! A little fluffy though, especially with the last chapter so... so full of desperation and overflowing with.... impatience? Itchiness? Either way, I have actually come up with a really interesting idea for my first HP fic. And I do plan on writing it... I tend to write quickly so, who knows? I might get something up this weekend. I'm just having a terrible time writing Harry... :(
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From ANON - yeniferr on September 05, 2008
FUCK YOU! I HATE YOU! HOW DARE YOU STOP IT NOW. WHY!?

I want more... I'm sad cuz there's not more. I didn't mean what I said above. IT WAS GETTING SO GOOD. And then. CLIFFHANGER.

It's a good cliffhanger though. UPDATE SOON.
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From Phoenix2000 on September 05, 2008
OK, sorry I slacked off a bit so this is my review of 24 and 25. I love the angst that Draco is going through. The whole 'roar' and throwing the ink bottle was perfect. It is different from the usual 'Hermione being angsty over Draco' stories. I like this twist. I'm not quite sure I understand Hermione's seeming indifference to the whole situation though, I'm guessing she is in like a state of shock. As for the trip to Hogsmeade - I love it - especially the snowball fight. I can't wait for more.
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From ANON - Himitsu on September 05, 2008
Yay for Draco's happy Christmas Day! It really made mine. I had to read it twice, and I couldn't stop smiling about it. You know, I just noticed this thing in this chapter (and it makes me feel a bit dumb, too): Whenever sections are done with Draco's thoughts in mind, it's always "Granger," but when it's Hermione it's always "Draco"...He gets to her more than she realizes and it's adorable. I think I'll have to re-read the whole damn thing again just to say if it was always there...(that's what I say, but I'm pretty sure it's just an excuse to read your wonderful story again).

Snow sex, snow sex! That'd be too wet and cold and there'd be shrinkage. Doubt that Draco's pride would EVER allow such a thing to happen.

I'm waiting for the happy ending :D and btw, this chapter made me completely forget that it's the middle of summer in Southern California. It was just THAT awesome.
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From ANON - ochit on September 04, 2008
You're evil! Leaving us hanging like that once again!!! LOL!!!!You're last two chapters are so short! I want more!!!
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From SilverEyedPhoenix on September 04, 2008
how dare you stop there!! awesome post btw, really really really looking forward to the next one.
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From kazfeist on September 04, 2008
I feel weird, now. ;) It's nice seeing what I've suggested show up in print, though. :D On the the rest of the story!
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From scarletwitchextreme on September 04, 2008
Oh my thanks for the onsite reply, and u caught me redhanded with the hit counter...lol, cause I dont think u realize how high in my mind the singular chapter is now ranked, that just has to be the best smut/lemon I have ever read, and hope u get juicier with each meeting. Anyway onto this new chappy, I love that its long and oh atleast its a change in temperature (literally) for them, and their relationship as she decided to not avoid him, and poor draco he is absolutely in love with the girl, and u made a little worried with your statement of "fixing" things will take a long time, ARGHHH!!!, sigh, u know very well what kind of torture u r gonna put your avid readers through, u r going to make us beg and plead eventually arent u? Anyway that last bit in the chapter where things were getting hot enough to melt the snow around them, i HOPE THEY FOLLOW THROUGH, and hermione doesn't turn frigid again, I could understand that she is confused and worried about everything, but she knows deep down its right and if she has so much trust in him, and he wants her love, whats wrong with her? maybe i am missing something by just watching her as the typical overthinking hermione that turns on and off when its convienant to her, but she is totally different now than before the sex, and she doesn't see that, poor naivety. Brilliant, brilliant job, and keep the updates coming.
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