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Reviews for Claiming Hermione

By : ilke
  • From dynonugget on September 03, 2008
    What a great chapter. I laughed, I tensed, I nearly drooled. I loved your description of Christmas morning so much. The playful day trip to Hogsmeade was an excellent way to transition to the next stage in their relationship, too. You're writing both Draco and Hermione so well! Thank you for sharing YOUR magic!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 03, 2008
    OMG. I totally SQUEED when I saw this updated : ))) This was a beautiful edition to a beautiful tale that for me surprisingly just keeps getting better and better. I have no idea how you're doing what you're doing, maybe it's the rich detailed descriptions of the settings, atmosphere, moods, and the allegories you use. I also like the way you expose their inner thoughts in ways that feel authentic, personable, and yet somehow still IC! Really, the entire beginning of this chapter I could feel Draco's pain...the description of being in love with someone who doesn't love you back as being trapped at all sides like a failed Apparition was brilliant. I loved that we see finally what Hermione is really going through with her little avoidance routine. I think I can relate to her better now that what she's thinking has been revealed more. I like that she reflects on Draco and how he may have affected other girls who have had the opportunity to be intimate with him. The musing about Pansy was funny and really insightful. And oh boy, what a interesting game they're caught up in...but it isn't a game is it? Draco is in it for keeps, and I'm not sure Hermione is ready! lol. I LOVED the whole Hogsmeade trip, and that for the first time Draco really enjoyed that trip and saw in a different way just because of who he was with and how she was engaging him. This really feels like a real courtship Ilke, not just a recounting of one. Kudos to you....and the snowball fight was done just right, just like a witch and wizard would play and I'm so excited about how it ended....I hope Hermione allows herself to be vulnerable so that Draco can feel OK about being that way as well. I can't wait to see where you take them next. Oh, I'm wondering about that snitch...is she going to give it to him? I hope so. AWESOME update, as always!
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  • From Breenieweenie on September 03, 2008
    fabulous chapter! I cannot wait to see what he does to her in the cold. You know he can get her so hot and wet it would melt the snow! Geeze, I feel like such a perve. You are amazing and I'm so excited to see you write a marriage law fic. I know it isn't the most original idea, but I'm sure you can make it interesting and new. A possessive/obsessive Draco is HOT. Anyways, I feel for Draco and I just hope Hermione realizes soon how she feels for him, but they can still dance around that for awhile longer.... and more explosive sex. ;D

    I'll definitely check out the smutastic awards.

    Once again, I absolutely adore you. I think you are brilliant and I am definitely one of your top fans(if not your number one!).
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  • From on September 03, 2008
    So thoughtful of Hermione!!! I'm sure she was feeling conflicted, but Draco did need some fun. I'm sure she wasn't planning it... BUT, nothing like a naughty romp in the snow to keep the Christmas Spirit alive.
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  • From smmz79 on September 03, 2008
    wooo gret chap i love the tension between them... i love that the underlying feelings are always present with them and i loved how hermione broke the mood by throwing a snowball at him that was hysterical and got the ball rolling in the right direction...
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  • From Wildcatcdc on September 03, 2008
    Oh, I just love this update! So sweet and touching and funny! Hermione can just sense him and his feelings so well, if only she'd open her eyes and realize what that means already! LOL! And Draco, man has he got it bad. And he recognizes it, too, which only adds to his turmoil. I loved that snowball fight, that was fantastic, a magical snowball fight has got to be a blast, and it's so clever how you've done it. That whole playful scene eased the tension between them so much, and they really needed it. And I love where they ended up! *grin* Makes me want winter to hurry up and get here, and I don't even like the season! :D My knees are melting, I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Fantastic update!
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  • From BloodyLove on August 30, 2008
    Poor Draco. I'm glad you are going to make them kinda dance around this. I would hate for the story to end. I love it. Yeah a window would be interesting. If it was way up high and someone from the grounds could see them it would like one of those dun dun dun moments. Kind of be able to make out their faces but you couldn't tell because they are so far away. Doesn't matter I just can't wait to find out how everyone else is going to find out. If they are caught or decide to come clean. Well update soon.
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  • From RussianRouletteKiss on August 30, 2008
    :fans self: Is it just me or is it hot in here? I hope you update soon this story is AMAZING.
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  • From ANON - crissy on August 29, 2008
    OMG! sorry I haven't been able to read lately I got a new job and it keeps me busy! I loved the last 2 chapies! The way you wrote it was awesome! I also looked at the you tube site for "claiming Hermione" and I loved it!!!!!!!!! I cant wait to read the next chapter! >
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  • From Smartgirl13w on August 27, 2008
    Lol, well thanks! I used to write, but not much anymore (except for reviews). Great chapter, I just about burst at the seams when I saw it was posted. Literally, I gasped twice or thrice before clicking on the link!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2008
    I like the premise so far. It's so funny because my very first fanfic idea started with Hermione catching Draco in tears. It never got written so I'm glad to have yours to read!
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  • From oliversangel on August 27, 2008
    *SQUEE* Congrats on 30,110 hits!!! ^.^
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  • From ANON - gabby1234 on August 27, 2008
    oh man this is pure gold i could literally take it to a bank and invest it with interest i love love love the way the first paragraph was written it was like reading poetry and i bet when draco dose "get his feet under him" hes gona take hermione by storm i cannot wait! this is totally awesome if your story doesn't win that would be a conspiracy in fact i am going to go there and vote i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From classsic on August 27, 2008
    Wow! Brilliant new chapter.
    I feel so bad for Draco! My heart is breaking for him. Please don't put him in agony too long!

    Well done! I can't wait for the next update. I'm excited to read what would happen next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2008
    Honestly this is just the begining of much more between this two lovers.. And I intend to keep reading post soon..
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