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Reviews for Claiming Hermione

By : ilke
  • From ichiruki on August 26, 2008
    So exciting to hear about your noms, and I loved Breenieweenie's trailer for this fic too! She does such excellent work doesn't she, I need to find out what my log in info for youtube was, and then go sign in to comment there. LOL!

    Ok, *rubs hands together all evil-like* so what is he going to do??? Hmmm my brain is swimming with possible "naughty, naughtier, and naughtiest" type options. And poor innocent naive Hermione, she's really not going to see it coming. Pun not intended, but now that's it written who knows, it could prophetic? *snickers* If only I could see the future, but then it wouldn't be nearly as fun as imagining the possibilities.

    And poor stupid (if not more likely "emotional damaged goods") Draco, he needs to find his voice and just say all the things he should have said that night to let the poor chit know what he was really thinking and feeling about her, I mean, she's not a mind reader, unlike certain other Dark Wizards (LMAO!). Sure she's bright, but emotionally, eh, she's not a Ravenclaw in the social skills department. And finding yourself shagged senseless, literally, it's not like she was going to become a Miss Wordy-Word Smith after that.

    "Find your sack, dude!" That's what I was left thinking when I could finally think again, lol. Did I mention the WOW-tastic-ness of that last chapter? Ok, that said, feel a delicious "yikes" coming on for Hermione. I think he is SO going to take her by surprise, as she kind of comes off not knowing what to do next, as if she's almost a little lost on how to feel now. The boy is so hot and cold with the way he shows his feelings. Again with the "Find your sack, dude" and then the "speak your mind" feelings this chapter leaves me with. And that obviously is not just going to happen overnight. So again with the "can't wait to see what happens next" part of this review!

    ichi-you know you are making me want to write a smut drabble, LOL! And you should know, I haven't felt like writing in over a month! ;) Gods. I'm still thinking about your sex chapter.

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  • From Tootsie on August 26, 2008
    I'm worry about Draco very much maybe I understand his feeling so far. And I don't sure about Hermione what she will doing next? Yes I know she love Draco too . After naked&share desire with the man It's made her shock or something. But please you two please understand each other soon..Love -- Tootsie/ticcia =D
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  • From kazfeist on August 26, 2008
    Awww, poor Draco! Looking forward to all the rest of the chapters, hon! :D
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  • From ichiruki on August 26, 2008
    @23 ichi say one word with bit of punctuation.....WOW!

    ichi be speechless now, she only keep thinking....WOW!


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  • From ichiruki on August 26, 2008
    @ ch 22

    LOL, It was all hotness and nerves! Loved it, but I still found a few lines funny despite the building of tension, sexual and nervousness alike!

    "And not in the way you hand over your wallet to a mugger in hopes that he won
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  • From DracosBear on August 25, 2008
    I've loved reading this story. The way you write really makes it 'real'. Like you're there in between them. [Or wish you were ;>] I've chased my son out of my room when I see there's a new chapter up. If interrupted, I can get downright violent when I'm reading something I enjoy. And I am enjoying this. Can't wait for the next installment.

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  • From oliversangel on August 25, 2008
    Loved the chapter!! Can't wait to read more, as always, and I have posted two stories on here now, since you asked so nicely. I feel so naked, and exposed, and vulnerable. Eep. This is different than the baby site I posted on. Be gentle!! I will be waiting. ^.^ *refreshes screen to check for another chapter*
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  • From on August 25, 2008
    Wow! Just wow! I can't believe i haven't read this story before - it's amazing!! I love your writing style & the way you portray Hermione and Draco is beautiful. But at this point i feel really sorry for Draco :( Please please update again soon :)
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  • From ANON - sheryne on August 25, 2008
    THe more i read this story the more i love it! Your sex chapter was unblivable! it was so good! i almost felt like i actualy was granger literaly being fucked by draco.... So cool!
    Anyway I was sacred that the story would be ruined be the "after sex chapters" but you'r so good you avoided it all and made it so much more interesting... I really can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so ecxited to read how the two of theme are gonna work things out!
    Please please please spare my mental health! and update asap!
    the wait is driving me crazy...( In case you havent notice or read it alredy...)

    Your's always Sheryne
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  • From ANON - hate2luv on August 25, 2008
    Do I really need to reiterate just *how* mind-numbingly awesome the last chapter was? Yes? It was very, very, very, very, very...(goes on for an indefinite period of time)...mind-numbingly awesome. Lol. I just loved the intensity of Draco's emotions, so needless to say, this chapter had me going 'Wtf, Hermione...how *could* you not feel something for him?!' And I feel terrible for Draco, too. Ah well, can't wait to read more, though ! Cheers
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  • From on August 25, 2008
    NOOOOOOOO!!!! I get why you did it, but that didn't make it easier to read. Please don't let him give up. He does have more to prove to her - she deserves it. Too many stories gloss over his treatment of her over the years. BUT, I hope things aren't bad for long. I'm a softie and love a happy ending... will I get one? Pretty please?
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  • From on August 25, 2008
    That was amazing! I'm not sure I've read a better sex scene anywhere! Draco was perfect, in and out of control - perfect! I can't wait to move on to the next chapter.
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  • From Eilisbelle on August 25, 2008
    Ok; I remember this chapter as the second chapter when you had originally posted on CG. Great chapter!!! So can't wait to see what happens...
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 25, 2008
    Told you how I feel about this wonderful Chapter on GE, but just dropping more love here. I'm just gonna follow you around like a fangirl as long as you continue writing this....it's that good. Anyhow, I do have something different to say this time. lol. Whenever a piece of writing sucks me in like this, it forces me to reflect on why. And I think I figured it out. It think it's amazing how you tapped in the psyche of Draco, a dude, but you didn't emasculate him. What I'm saying is that you're really good at capturing the human experience without gendering it. It's really a special gift that only the best authors can pull off. It always surprises me when a male author writes a really good female character...I think it's a bit easier for women to write men because they are the default in our society, but where female authors usually trip up is showing vulnerability and love without making the guy sound melodramatic, like something that stepped out of a fantasy (I'm guilty of this ::shrug::), or stripping away his raw masculinity. I know, all of this can be debated, but that's just how I feel about the way you've written Draco. Like I said before, I've never identified with him like this, and it's a bit jarring to feel so aligned to his character instead of Hermione's. I absolutely love it though, and thank you for the new experience. Whenever you update, I'll be happy, so don't rush it, you're creating a classic here!
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  • From Wildcatcdc on August 25, 2008
    Oh, how perfect! I think the aftermath is just so realistically done. Both lost in their regrets, his anguish that she doesn't love him back (in his own head anyway, it's there, they just haven't realized it yet), her realizing she's not a virgin anymore. I think so many of us have those same or very similar thoughts after such a momentous event. Though I have to say, my anguish for Draco is more intense than for Hermione at this point, not that I don't feel deeply for her and what she's trying to sort out, but Draco....man, it's got to be so hard for him to feel such vulnerability. I just can't wait to see how you bring these two around, and clear the air. You do such a wonderful job with emotions, you're certainly pulling at all of mine.

    Very nicely done, I love it!
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