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By : ilke

From LittleMissPrincess on August 25, 2008
Hrmm, I did quite like this chapter, 'cept for the shortness.
I'm very glad that Draco's finally admitted his love, and although I don't like them having the unhappiness with each other, it's more life-like that way, and works out well.
Wheee, I'm all excited for the weekly update, lol.

xxo
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From SilverEyedPhoenix on August 25, 2008
i cant tell you how excited i was when i saw the new chapter up! i srsly think i jumped out of my seat ^_^ great chapter btw. Im really really really really looking forward to the next one
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From scarletwitchextreme on August 25, 2008
Oh my word firstly, thanks for the nod, and like does not describe what I feel for this story especially chap23, I think I am tryin to committ it to memory the amount of depraved times that I have re-read it. Secondly I cant believe hermione get on like that I mean is she so shallow in this all of a sudden why has she so suddenly shut down? POOR POOR Draco, sigh, you better fix this quick cause I cant take all that hippogriff exploding tension and dance again, Poor draco he has his heart ripped out of his chest. Fix this please and soon. Sigh, keep up the brilliant work and u r a bloody genius, so update soon plzzzzzzzzzzz.
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From Breenieweenie on August 25, 2008
So this chapter was a bit sad, but I must say it is always a good read when there is a bit of angst right after an amazing smut scene. You are so unbelievably talented and are just incredible. It was my honor to make you a trailer because this has to be one of the best dramione fics I have ever read. You capture their emotions so well, I can imagine everything and it's like I'm feeling it too.

Now, I know you said that you would be willing to write me a fic as a thank you gift, all you need is a prompt. I honestly don't think you need to because this story is just so wow and it inspired me to make the trailer. But (because I am giddy that someone as talented as you would want to write little ol' me a fic)if you really feel the need to thank me in some way and really want to write a fic I'll give you some ideas and let you choose and do it however you want.

I'm a total cliche fan girl. I can't help it and I honestly don't think I want too, these cliches are just too good even if they have been done fifty billion times... I think you could choose one and make it way better. My first and most favorite is the whole Draco veela fic. I don't care if they are in school or in their early twenties or however, but for some reason I love the whole one person for someone and a possessive Draco is totally hot. Also, if he is a veela, possessive dark Draco... even better. My second favorite (if you haven't guessed) is the whole marriage law fic. I have no idea why but it really appeals to me. Once again it doesn't matter if they are in school or out of it.. or if Draco hates Hermione or if he has been secretly in love with her. Either way is fine with me. My third favorite is the whole Voldemort wins (either Draco get's hermione as a prize or Draco helps Voldemort win so he can claim Hermione), but again.. a very dark, obsessive Draco. Also, it isn't required, but for some reason (probably because I've only ever been with my husband and I'm a total romantic), but I like the whole Hermione is a virgin thing... which you have done so perfectly in Claiming Hermione. The only thing I ask is that you have one or more sex scenes cause you are brilliant at it and I'm a total smut lover. (I know I kinda got carried away with ideas... sorry).

Once again, you really don't have to write me a fic and I do not want you to feel obligated in any way at all. I made you a trailer for your fic because I adore it and I wanted to, not expecting anything in return. I think you are so talented and I was happy to do it. You are such a wonderful, magnificent writer (i really need to find more adjectives to describe how bloody fantastic you are) and thank you so much for even writing this story. I can't wait to read more!

Breenie!
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From ANON - the bells on August 25, 2008
Fabulous. I love Hermione, but the girl's being stupid right now. And I hate to see how hurt Draco is...though some karmic retribution was in order for his past dismissals of his lovers, I'm sure. I really hope this all works out in the end. And imagine the grudge sex they can have in the meantime! *fans cheeks*
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From ANON - Himitsu on August 25, 2008
You put quite the tear in my eye, my dear. As much as I'd love the happy morning after, I am endlessly grateful for it making it...difficult for the two of them. I've never seen this kind of depth in a Draco/Hermione fic and the way they act breaks the mold for who they are, giving them new dimensions to ponder...It makes it all the easier to feel what they do. I am just sitting on pins and needles waiting for more...Even if you're going to rend my heart (and possibly poor Draco's) in two!
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From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2008
Well I think she took one look into his eyes and realised he was capable of reciprocating feelings that she has for him and that's what has her freaked. She's just realised that it wasn't just sex and that it meant more than that for both of them and she had nothing to prepare herself for the emotions that hit her. Draco might well know what to do with their bodies (yes indeed, thank goodness for fanficdom) but he has a lot of growing up to do in his head as does Hermione and I look forward to seeing them make that journey together. That's my take and I'm sticking to it!! LOL (unless another chapter tells me otherwise). ;) Oh and isn't he a confused angry young man now. He doens't know how to deal with his heart either. Loved it!!
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From ANON - Laur on August 24, 2008
This chapter again was amazing!!!! Keep it up!
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From ANON - JKRsunkmyship on August 24, 2008
I can't tell you how much I adore this story. I compulsively check Adultfanfiction to see if you've updated.... and trust me when I say that there are very few fics that I do that with! I crave your updates! I've even gone back and reread chapters to keep myself from going crazy. I've only ever done that with Sage's fics (which are my favorite fics of all time easily).... so this story is well on it's way to being one of those favs, too. This last chapter was so sad. Although I understand completely why you had to do it (and it will make the story much better in the long run), it was just torture to read. There has been all this tension all this ache on Draco's part, and finally there was sweet blissful relief in the chapter, only for that ache to come back doubly so. Because now that he's had her... it will be twice as hard to stay away. And it will be twice as hard for me not to obsessively check for updates.

Wonderful job!
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From distinctlyME on August 24, 2008
I've been reading this for a very long time( I'm one of the guilty lurkers) and I'm always enthralled with each chapter.
You have an amazing way with words, that I most definitely envy. Your ability to convey their emotions is amazing.

I find a lot of Draco/Hermione stories rush them into something(I've even been guilty of it), but your transition was calculated and perfect. Not to mention a complete surprise.

I wanted to review last chapter and let you know how I really cherish this fic. It's my favorite. I promise to review from now on. You definitely deserve them.

Waiting patiently for Draco to gain his footing and for your next update.

~dM.
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From oliversangel on August 24, 2008
Congrats on the nomination!!! I am so happy for you!! You completely, totally, absolutely, (enough adjectives? lol) deserve it. I have to say again that I love your story. You really are amazing, and an inspiration, at least to me. I haven't posted anything on this site, but I have posted on another site, and if I may say, you intimidate me. ^_^ I check obsessively every day, at least 3 times a day for an update. I am patient, but I must say, I am getting antsy for my fix. I am not one to talk about updating expediantly though, I have many stories I am behind on. ^_^ And I have solved the mystery of how I found your story, from SoftObsidian, is it? I was reading one of her stories, and since she reccomended it, and I liked her stuff, I thought I'd check you out. And I am oh so glad I did. kisses!! And thank you for sharing your story with us!! XXOO
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From Phoenix2000 on August 23, 2008
OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! I have to say first off the I am LOVING this story! And I am loving the dirty talk as well. You are a very good writer. The chapter you wrote when Draco was "teaching" her to say naughty words was the best one I had read until this one. I would have to agree with your other reviewers that is one of the BEST sex scenes I have read so far! GREAT job!! I can't wait for more!!
*OK time to go change my knickers now*
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From ANON - Pipa on August 22, 2008
You didn't write tamale cookies in the fic xD you wrote that about me calling you nena hahaha:P

Man the longest freakin kink fic I have ever read in the history of D/H or any other fic period.

I can't wait for the next instalment XDDDDDDD

keep up the good work
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From flidaisus on August 21, 2008
That was very hot! It gets better and better as the story goes along. I have one question though. In your warnings you had put BDSM and Ds. Is that something that they're going to explore more, or is Draco telling Hermione what to do as far as it's going to go? That's why I started reading your story, but if Ds doesn't get added to a greater extent, I'm still going to keep reading. I love it.
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From ANON - Claire on August 20, 2008
oh my god, oh my god, oh my god oh my god. This ist really the fucking BEST story i've ever found. THANK YOU FOR IT!!!
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