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Reviews for Claiming Hermione

By : ilke
  • From kazfeist on August 11, 2008
    No thanks, necessary! And, I noticed a few changes that actually changed the timbre of the piece. The font changes at the end, for example. Can't wait for the rest. :D
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  • From ItalianBeauty on August 10, 2008
    OH.MY.GOD. That was amazing. I can not believe I haven't found this story before! You can only imagine how pleased I was to be able to read it all in one go and get to the wonderful sex, and the love. I am a sucker for love. :) And although I am not much of a fan of anal play even that was portrayed tasteful. Great job, and please keep it up, soon and often!
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  • From CeriseAnouk on August 10, 2008
    Oh.My.God. That was... That was... THE WAS SO GOD DAMN AMAZING!!! I am shocked and awed at your talant and skill for depicting this scean. It was so much a perfectly beautiful and itimate moment between the two characters that I feel as though I should look away from the images you depicted. It was such a personal moment filled with so much emotion and FEELING that it seems so private. I have read many stories on AFF and this is the first I've felt the need to leave a review. Wow. Just wow. I can't wait for the next chapter and the afterglow that's sure to come with it. Whatever happens next in your story is sure to be spactacular now that this has come between the two. Wow. p.s I'm so happy that you've posted this story on FF.net so I could add it to my favorites. Thank you for such a great read.
    ~Ceri
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2008
    My goodness woman!!! What do I say to this? (without giving away that parts of it fulfilled a few private fantasies). That was damn hot indeed and again I have to agree with your Hermione because the buggar drew it out too long and he should have just got in there and done the deed!! LOL And then slowed it down for rounds two to exhaustion. ROFL!! Isn't it funny how so often when writing a story about Draco, quite a few writers (myself included) tend to give him sexual experiences far beyond his years? And yes, pleasantly, I found with this chapter that although he still had experience and a good deal of control, the vulnerability was there, the anxiousness to please, to satisfy, the self doubt of someone not so sure of himself was there too and I LOVED that. One of your reviewers mentioned having a 'cougar' moment. All I can say is "ditto"!!! And there's no doubt that Hermione enjoyed her 'educational' experience. LOL

    LMAO and thank you for putting me on the stand in list right behind you. I do hope you leave a little something left over for me to toy with. ;)
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  • From luv2cusmile on August 10, 2008
    sooo as i was reading this chapter-- the one chapter i've been dying for!!!-- i got interrupted 3 times. 3 times!! this is not the chapter to be interrupted during. i mean, going from hot to cold, hot to cold is not fun. but i so enjoyed this chapter!! i'm not really into being very smutty about sex and everything but during my interruptions i had time to think about it and it just really fits in with this story. draco isn't there to declare his undying love for her and worship her and all that jazz. he is there for the sex so its just natural that he would talk that way. my gosh i'm glad that's over!!! haha now let's do it again.... HAHAHAHAHA
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  • From leValkyrie on August 10, 2008
    oh my God that chapter was sooo awesome!!! for a first time Hermione's rocked! that chapter was soo awesome, i dont know what to say!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on August 10, 2008
    That was wonderful! And he's so skilled for such a young man....hell Id take him on with that kind of knowledge!!! I would totally become a cougar LOL


    Nice job...very detailed, nice description of all the senses. Im happy...not that my happiness matters since it isnt my story...none the less =)


    Happy writing!!
    ~SG~
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  • From smmz79 on August 10, 2008
    Holy shit... do i ever need a cold shower... omg that was amazing.... woo... great job....
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  • From AshaVincent on August 10, 2008
    Glass of Wine...Downed it
    Cold Shower...Didn't help
    2nd Glass of Wine...Nope, that didn't do it either.

    JUMPED HUBBY!! That did that trick!!! *Evil, satisfied grin*

    WELL DONE!!!!

    Gotta read it again.. (Hubby is quite appreciative and sends a thank you.)
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  • From LoveForSandi on August 10, 2008
    I love this story very much, the only cmment I really have is on your grammer-it can be bad at times. That's the only thing, keep up the great work.
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  • From OliversBludger on August 10, 2008
    Oh, my God...that was intensely hot. I actually need to turn on the AC now. *fans self*

    You really are a fantastic writer. I love how tender Draco is, and how humbled he seems to have become since his mother died. I always had a inkling that Draco had a slightly softer side, and you bring it out so well while he still remains snarky, sarcastic, and yummy. :-)

    I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Tam on August 10, 2008
    that was the best sex scene i've ever read. THANK YOU!!!
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  • From luv2cusmile on August 10, 2008
    well isn't that a teaser. =P i have to know how draco does it. i know he will definitely make it memorable and he won't hurt her but half of me wants him to just do it and definitely not whisper sweet nothings in her ear but not exactly kick her out of the bed the next morning; the other half of me wants him to be as sweet and gentle and possible while still letting hermione know that they are not a couple. maybe even hold her afterwards without saying anything. ahh i'd like either! updates are good. =D
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  • From tsorg on August 09, 2008
    Lovely, nicely built up intensity. I love it. They are almost like magnets so drawn to each other and it's delicious when you keep them from not quite being together. Can't wait for the taking and giving so to speak.....
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  • From penenelliepie on August 08, 2008
    Just when they're getting down to it, all that longing and UST/F. I was SO looking forward to it.

    UPDATE SOON! I need my fix...
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