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By : ilke
  • From ANON - ochit on July 09, 2008
    No need to rush to the sex part.... Besides foreplay is sooo much more satisfying. You are quite an expert in teasing us though. I am very excited to read the next one. Please dont let us wait too long...
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  • From mystical07 on July 09, 2008
    i also just realized that in one of the first sentences i said "you're a fabulous reader" i meant writer. oops. my bad. although, im sure you are a fabulous reader. but i digress.
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  • From mystical07 on July 09, 2008
    Hey! omgoodness. this is really one of my all time fave stories. like, in all honesty, i think you're a fabulous reader. i just started reading it a few hours ago, and i could not stop. I love your Draco in this, because in all honesty, i've always pictured him as being more sensitive than he ever let on, and his family life probably was not the best. actually, i betcha, that is the understatement of the year. after all, his father IS lucius malfoy. but then again, i also like a redeemed lucius. and a dark draco can be fun too. idk. i like all the faces of the malfoys. especially draco. and also, i think you're really nailing harry. he always struck me as being very reasonable...unless things were kept from him, like in OotP. I know you probably get a lot of complaints about "WHY HASN'T THERE BEEN SEX!?" but honestly, they're a bit young, and like hermione said, a lot of girls confuse love with sex, granted hermione's not like that. and really, they've only been tentative friends for about a month, so they need to wait a while before they do the adult hokey-pokey...[my friend came up with that...i find it amusing]. and another thing, is i like their banter, because i mean really, who else is gonna provide her with intellectual stimulation? certainly not ron, and poor harry has so much on his plate, what with defeating moldy voldie and all.

    on a different note, i was a bit surprised to see blaise so violent in this story, as i sometimes am a fan of blaise/hermione. but it's your story, and i think you portray him as he probably should be portrayed: a death eater's son, who has probably seen his father do many of the things he talks about doing. plus, he's a slytherin. also, i've read in some stories, and in a story of mine that i really DO need to update, pansy has/is been/being portrayed as a very misunderstood girl, who's actually quite nice, very witty, and yes, a bit cruel, but only to those who threaten her, and hers. *shrug* oh, and i like daphne! she seems really down to earth, but like you've said, she is in love with someone who has already graduated.

    i know, this is an extremely LONNNNNNG review, but i just had so much to say to you. oh and just some few tiny things. i think that over christmas break something should happen. like major snow. and a snow fight b/t dm and hg. also i think i'd like to see her make a snow angel, and it start snowing again, and he kiss her in the snow. gah. that would be just perfect. i really can't wait to read harry's reaction to draco wanting to fight for the light. ron surely won't trust him, but i honestly think harry will be level-headed. i think he already suspects that hermione may have feelings for our fave dragon.

    gosh, there is just so much i could say to you right now. but, this review has been long enough, so i think i shall quit. i would love to hear your feedback on my story, and maybe give me some ideas. it's called Unwinding Cable Car. and it's on page 14 of this site. sooo far back i know. but i haven't updated since april. and i reallllyyyy need some reviews. lol. but no pressure, i know you have to be super busy. anyway, thanks for reading my outrageously long review, and i hope i helped somehow.
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  • From ANON - meakochan on July 09, 2008
    I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapters!

    I have a feeling that their relationship will be strained even more from this chappie on for a while. But it all leads up to the moments that we want, right? It has to get worse before it gets better. So YAY!!!
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  • From chickacherrycola on July 09, 2008
    *BIG HUG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* I was starting to get worried about you! No card, no call, no smoke signals...I was about ready to call the DA and have them look for you! (That'd be SO awesome!) Missed you! Can't wait for more
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  • From thiskittenhasclawz on July 09, 2008
    yay!!! more please!!!
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  • From crescentmoon on July 09, 2008
    Thank you for posting another wonderful chapter.
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on July 09, 2008
    another good chapter, yay
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  • From mlui on July 09, 2008
    Great chapter! I'm glad Hermione's all right. I'm curious, did all the Dementors go over to Voldemort's side? I mean, there was a mass breakout from Azkaban previously in Book 5 because a lot of those Death Eaters that were previously locked up, were at the Ministry (for the Prophecy.) Hermione talks about Dementors still... I'm also gald that Harry is noticing, I mean what kind of friend would he be if he didn't? I'm surprised it is Harry who noticed and not Ron as Harry has a lot on his plate. Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Phoebejs on July 09, 2008
    Oh, please update again soon! I am completely addicted to this story. And I'm glad you decided to stop apologizing for the long wait. Sometimes sex and nothing but is good, but generally I prefer a little plot to go along with it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
    Love, Pheebs
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  • From ANON - gabby1234 on July 09, 2008
    i was dying with laughter when malfoy asked if granger was mental. the whole situation is so funny; where she says that she wants malfoy to be her first ahahaha i like how Hermione's written like Hermione. she would say something sweet and honest like that and to be fair honestly the real Hermione might not give it up till chapter 50 or more haha there's another story by akasha the kitty i don't know if ive mentioned it or you've heard of it its called the bracelet and it is awesome, also she is at chapter 53 i believe and still no sex but it is awesome so you know its cool especially this story! alls i ask is for more chapters soon
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  • From ichiruki on July 09, 2008
    A ch 18 I really like this chapter. The juxtaposition between his friendship with her and Ron and Harry's friendship with her is insightful, that and I wonder what it will take for him to want to be her first, like if part of the reason he decides to is to make what they have completely different, and much deeper than what she has with them. For some reason I see him being possessive and slightly jealous...odd, thing to wonder right? Though that could be delicious if he would, just like the title, Claiming Hermione, lol!

    LOL! I'm working on the epilogue follow up to M and A, so we'll see if drunk dialing makes it in or not, otherwise I'd be happy to co-author something. Actually not having to brainstorm by myself would be a novel thing I'd like to try, it was loads of fun working with BreenieWeanie on the trailer she made for NS, so I have to think it would be equally as fun to put a story together with someone else, especially having someone to have back forth about lines, and plot. That's why I think I'm stuck in the middle of The Prefect's Bathroom, I have an idea, but it seems so crazy, I'm not sure I can write it and pull it off, lol. But it's the only idea I have! *le sigh*

    Anyways, one author to another, keep up the great work! I'm always happy to see your story up. :)


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  • From Tootsie on July 09, 2008
    Slow? sure I can wait, dont worry (^_^ . keep going.
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on July 09, 2008
    You don't have to apologize!! We'll wait! And ooooo..what's Harry's interest in Draco all of a sudden....this is getting so tense! I love that Draco made an official turn around in this chapter...I'm giddy...you're doing this the RIGHT way...painstakingly slow...we feel what they're feeling..and it's just wonderfully agonizing and YUMMY at the same time. Keep it coming!
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  • From leValkyrie on July 09, 2008
    great update...so Draco is going to switch sides and I totally sympathize with Ron about losing his appetite after seeing his parents together...i heard mines...ewww! anyway i wanna know if Draco is going to take Hermione up on his offer
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