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  • From Heidi191976 on June 04, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I hope that Severus doesn't kill Ron because then Hermione would be alone since he would be in Azkaban. If Ron did attack her, what did he mean by asking her what she was doing at Hogwarts. I am curious as to why he would be there. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From catysmom1028 on June 04, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Sampdoria on June 04, 2008
    I don't mind fluffy:-) As long as Ron is dumped, I am perfectly happy:-))
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on June 04, 2008
    jjust to let you know crookshanks is a boy cat so you might what to change that she into he
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 04, 2008
    Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Kim on June 04, 2008
    Snape is a little too OOC for my tastes. Snape would never say 'Let's do it', it's just not him. Maybe you could try to develop the characters a little. Tell us what they're thinking. I do like the story, though. Keep it up.
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  • From Citten on June 04, 2008
    alright bring on the action! i will be waiting1 update soon! :)
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 03, 2008
    Excellent. I am glad that Hermione and Severus have talked to each other. I hope that they do get together and raise their babies at Hogwarts. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From Citten on June 03, 2008
    okay i just found your story and i love it!! i love the way you have severus' charater. i also love that she is having twins! (i have always wanted to have twins) glad ron is almost out of the picture at least as a boyfriend. love hermiones parents totally wonderful. now i am dying for more chapters and i really hope that you have lots planned for the story for i love long stories!!! really long stories! :) please update soon!
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  • From VampireSeductress on June 02, 2008
    update soon!

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  • From Heidi191976 on June 02, 2008
    Excellent. I am glad that you re-wrote chapter two. I think this is much better. I can't wait to read more to see how her father reacts to the news and also to see what happens when Severus finds out. As for the names of Hermione's parents, I don't think they were ever mentioned by name. So anything would work.
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  • From ANON - hamie on June 02, 2008
    At the Harry Potter Lexicon http://www.hp-lexicon.info/wizards/granger.html both of Hermione
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on June 02, 2008
    i like can't wait for more
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  • From jessirose85 on June 01, 2008
    I think its Hugo but not entirely sure xx
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  • From angelnomiko on June 01, 2008
    wow that was awsome .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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