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Reviews for Closer

By : Losertastictoaster
  • From Sampdoria on June 01, 2008
    I really like this! I could have lived without the knowlegde that Hermione obviously have had sex with Ron, that is a rather big lack of jugdement on her part. (Not that she went on with her life, but that she was naked in the same room as Ron, I absolutely, totally hate that pairing:-)
    I look forward to read more so update again soon!
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  • From VampireSeductress on June 01, 2008
    Update Soon!

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on June 01, 2008
    OK hon, gonna have to agree with the first two reviews on this one. Great premise but the sentences are choppy....they are more like random thoughts than actual sentences, there is no flow to them. I think the story has potential but you might consider a beta and perhaps slowing down a bit to give the story the chance to unfold at an easier pace to read.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 01, 2008
    This is a wonderful story. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From Utopia on June 01, 2008
    The plot has a lot of potential, but the writing is choppy and disjointed, the sentences don't flow into each other; and I feel you are lacking in description.

    Perhaps invest in a beta to catch the technical errors and to assist you with improving this story so it can achieve it's full potential.
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  • From Marti on June 01, 2008
    I like the premise..of course i love snape anyway. But it's moving too fast for me. Also Snape is very out of character. OOC isn't a problem for me, but this like a 180 degree difference in him. Also, I think a beta would help wit the spelling and grammatical errors. Don't get me wrong, I do like the story, but the OOC Snape is a little off-putting.


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