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  • From Shellnet on June 09, 2019

    I would like to see this fineshed to bad it was abandoned


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  • From mlui on March 20, 2009
    Wow, I didn't realize you've updated! So, I've been catching up on the last few chapters. It's all going downhill! I really can't believe his panick attack turned to running off (which is understandable), then to drugs...I hope he gets better. And please update again! =)
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 03, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on November 03, 2008
    This was great. I hope that Molly and Poppy will be able to get Severus through this and then tell him about Hermione. Then maybe he will realize how much of an idiot he is being and return to his family. If he doesn't feel like they should get married right away, he should tell Hermione so that they can work it out together. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on November 03, 2008
    Okay...really didnt like this chapter. Snape on drugs? Now thats just NOT right.

    Red
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 02, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Tenar10r on November 02, 2008
    I am enjoying your story, the plot is good however it feels a bit "thin". You keep the characters and their interactions moving at a
    nice pace but is still feels a bit like reading a rough draft. Flesh things out a bit more; add more 'atmosphere', describe the rooms
    they are in and the clothing they are wearing. Keep going! :)
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 02, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I think Severus is being childish by running away. I hope that someone finds him and knocks some sense into him. Hermione wants him no matter what. She won't go back to Ron now that everyone knows that she and Severus are expecting twins. Hopefully she will not get too overly stressed and end up having problems with the pregnancy. She would really hate Severus if she ended up losing her babies or having them early. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Sheena on November 02, 2008
    Oh my god, why did you make snape leave hermione needs him. I hope he comes back.

    Thanks for the update, hope they come more often.
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  • From ilovehaggis on November 02, 2008
    I really enjoy this story, but I find myself concerned with your grammar and spelling. Make sure to have your story beta'd and if you need a beta, let me know. I do highly enjoy this story line, but sometimes as a reader and a beta, I tend to not like to read stories because of misuse of words and simple spelling errors. Update soon =]
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  • From littlesirene on August 09, 2008
    I love this story, when u gonne update
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 03, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - korry on July 19, 2008
    i love this story i cant wait for the next chapter please update soon it's cool to see a gentle snape
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  • From ANON - sinbad on July 02, 2008
    Great story, update soon!
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  • From mlui on June 21, 2008
    I'm glad Ron feels remorse and apologised. It would be a shame if their friendship went out the window because of his rash anger. This relationship between Severus and Hermione is moving very fast, but at the same time, you can see why. I thought the conversation between Draco and Severus was a bit bland. They don't seem very close or that they talk often. But it's very sweet and kind of Draco to give Severus his mum's engagement ring. I'm glad he's taking it so well. I wonder what Harry, Ginny, and the rest of everyone will say? I wouldn't be surprised if news traveled fast with all the rumours going on. This is a very nice story so far and please update again soon! =)

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    P.S.: You mixed up the words, "except" and "accept." In Chapter 13: Ron says, "...If you're happy with Snape then I just have to except that and be happy for you." It should be "accept" here.

    Except (prep): apart from, omit, unless
    Accept (v): recieve, consent, take on, believe, put up with

    I wouldn't have mentioned it, but I caught this mistake a few times throughout the story and thought you should know...
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