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Reviews for Fall Out

By : SickPuppy
  • From kneeya on June 27, 2009
    Thank you, I loved it! It was as good as the first! Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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  • From llyoung on June 10, 2009
    I almost felt sorry for Lucius until I remembered everything he had done to Sev. Thanks for writing such a wonderful sequel.
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  • From cravedom on August 14, 2008
    I loved Lucius idea of what must have gone thru Severus mind, notice how he called Harry
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  • From on August 12, 2008
    I LOVED THE ENDING!!!!!!!!!
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  • From KaeXLi on August 11, 2008
    wow i couldnt beleive all those updates when i saw them. greatness as usual i really enjoyed the twist poor lucius all he wanted was to jerkin his shirken. glad everything worked out for my fav slash couple HP/SS
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  • From Jilliane on August 11, 2008
    (Chapter 14)

    ROFL!!! Yay!!!!

    Thank you very much for this. I loved it that Narcissa got her revenge (yay cravedom for that gem of inspiration! I still laugh over that comment!) and will have Lucius "barking like a puppy" after her forevermore. It's poetic justice that she'll be the one in control after what he did to her good time boys.

    I love it that once again, the mighty Lucius has fallen at the hands of those he disdains so much. It was quite clever how you worked in for him to be duped into freeing Studdy the same way as he freed Dobby, and I loved Harry's crowing over it. Fool me once indeed.

    All in all, this was a great read and a good laugh, and as always, I look forward to whatever you have in mind to delight us with next. Well done, and I'm quite pleased that you felt the need to keep me happy. ( :p )
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  • From Jilliane on August 11, 2008
    (Chapter 13)


    Go Studdy! Go Studdy! Erm.....the real one.
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  • From Jilliane on August 11, 2008
    (Chapter 12)


    Awww.....just for moi?





    You'd be much more convincing if it weren't for the "Could you be any blonder?! bit.




    Yes, I caught that, Missy!
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  • From ANON - karisma on August 11, 2008
    *snort* I almost pity Lucius... except he deserves it wholly and completely! Bravo! I love this as much as the first! And now a new house elf fan for Harry!

    The image of Harry hysterical with laughter over Lucius' various predicaments is a great one!
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  • From PantherRain on August 11, 2008
    Oh, too awesome! I loved this story. Glad to see Lucius get his too.
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  • From on August 11, 2008
    Why is Harry so dumb!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From cravedom on August 11, 2008
    That was such a logical and reasonable explanation for the magazine and it did not even occurred to me. I really have no imagination. Of course now I want to know:

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  • From ANON - karisma on August 10, 2008
    Aaand the referee waves the flag that signals that things are about to go very badly for Team Malfoy in the near future!

    Great stuff. Even when things go Lucius' way, you just know they're not going to.
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  • From ANON - Solomon on August 10, 2008
    please update soon
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  • From Jilliane on August 10, 2008
    (Chapter 11)

    *Ahem* (and you know I mean this with the utmost sycophantic love)

    Firstly, I did not whinge, and secondly, had I whinged (which I most certainly did not!) it was to say that you were being too obtuse and vague, not that you weren't being obvious and clear. There's a difference, I'll have you know, the least being that I never expect anything you have to say and/or write to be either obvious or clear. (All in the "babble" indeed!) At any rate, it worked, and so we finally know something about Lucius' evil plan.


    Having said that, I certainly won't be surprised at any direction this story may take from here, including Sev not coming to rescue Harry, or even something so wild as having Narcissa suddenly burst in and begin thrashing Lucius in revenge for flaccidising her bedbuddies. I won't be surprised either if you return to your previous obliqueness and misdirection, in fact, I fully expect it, as your revenge on me because I've come to realise it's your mission in life to torture me with brilliant stories that have unpredicatable and frustratingly vague plots that I can't suss out, just so you can sit over there cackling and tossing dumb blonde jokes at me. Fine. So be it. I'll take the high road and let you have your fun, Oh Evil One. You know I'll keep reading anyway. Now, get to updating, Missy, or I'll show you some real whinging!!



    (btw...ta for the dedication, even though you misspelled my name the second time. Not to whinge or anything........*laughs evilly*)
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