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Reviews for Fall Out

By : SickPuppy
  • From Jilliane on August 10, 2008
    (Chapter 10)

    As annoyingly vague as ever, aren't you? Are you ever going to tell us WTF Lucius is looking for? A bit disappointing not to see Narcissa extract some revenge on Lucius for hexing her boytoys into flaccidness. I think she caved too easily, just not having them fetch her from the Manor, although I suppose I see her point in wanting to keep her lovers perky. She may as well stay home with her husband if they aren't.

    Next chapter please.
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  • From on August 09, 2008
    I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!

    THIS IS SO GOOD THAT I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
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  • From ANON - karisma on August 08, 2008
    ROFL!!! Oh LORD! I'd feel bad for Lucius if he didn't deserve every moment of watching Harry and Sev going at it. And who's got Narcissa smiling like that? It'd be true justice if it were a Weasley... >:)
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  • From Jilliane on August 08, 2008
    (Chapter 9)

    *Groans loudly, mumbles spitefully*


    What is Lucius after?!?!? I love Narcissa's cruelty in her teasing of Lucius. "....sat down with a wince.." Excellent! Also, I loved Lucius' shock at Severus' proposal of marriage to Harry, and his ire at them for getting down to business yet again. Poor Lucius! Although really....it's hard to feel sorry for him. So I'll take joy in his torture! Yay!

    Update soon!!
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  • From cravedom on August 05, 2008
    Darn it, what was the name of the magazine? It is not just a pregnancy magazine; is it? He seemed to be expecting a reaction; then again he just picked it up from the rack. The idea could be drive Harry to hysteria with all the gruesome and unpleasant details of pregnancy and childbirth
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  • From ANON - Solomon on August 04, 2008
    I am enjoying this IT is so funny. When is Malfoy going to get some relief
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  • From mikaela717 on August 04, 2008
    YAY! Updated!
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  • From Jilliane on August 03, 2008
    (Chapter 8)


    Yay! You updated! Poo! You left it hanging! Again!

    I'm not exactly sure if Sev and Harry's romantic interlude was concurrent with the first time Lucius disguised himself as Studdy, or if this is another visit he's made. Hmmm.....or did I miss something somewhere? Regardless, I'm dying to know more about Lucius' evil plan, and what, if any, revenge Narcissa is planning for Lucius for making her seek out studly young men to satisfy her cravening needs. Or is that the revenge? Yeah, I know, you love to keep us guessing! Please hurry and update this! Don't make us wait as long this time!

    Update!!
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  • From cravedom on July 15, 2008
    I miss your stories and your author notes, oh and Lucius, he really is really yummy in this story. I hope that whatever is keeping you from us is something fun and not RL being a bitch.
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  • From cravedom on June 21, 2008
    I know that store clerk; she works in the school supply where I tried to buy a five subject notebook with pockets.

    Lucius is awesome like always and I am developing a strong liking for him. Sure he needs to suffer a little but a sexless Lucius is a crime. Oh and BTW, a guy once told me that he did not need to be hard to enjoy having his prostate massaged
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  • From chantalmalfoy on June 17, 2008
    Ha! Poor Lucius, he deserves evil Narcissa! :)
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  • From on June 16, 2008
    well, I see that Luce is still not getting any, poor thing.

    I will be keeping watch for it.

    loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From KaeXLi on June 14, 2008
    i have to obey the bunny. poor *lucius snickers*
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  • From Jilliane on June 14, 2008

    ROFL!!!!! Yay, Narcissa!!!! I do so love it when Lucius gets what he deserves. I am curious, though, about who he sent the magazine subscription to, and what magazine it was for. Tell your bunnies to work extra fast on the next chapter so you can UPDATE SOON!!

    Looking forward to more of Narcissa getting her digs in!!
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  • From soloflamelady on June 10, 2008
    oooooooooohhhhhh I like this write more soon please. Bad bad lucius hee hee can't wait for studdy to take him down. Studdy should go to harry like dobby did.
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