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Reviews for Fall Out

By : SickPuppy
  • From on June 08, 2008
    Cissa, said it right, Good for him!!!!!!!!!

    I can't wait to see which of them gets preggers!!!!!!!
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  • From Hine on June 08, 2008
    Rawr! I don't like Lucius but I've got to agree with him. Harry is suck a cock whore XD
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  • From Jilliane on June 08, 2008

    Aww! I was hoping he'd get caught!

    Nice chapter....lol..Lucius the voyeur.....and we have the re-appearance of Narcissa. Wonder what she's got in mind? Update soon, please!
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  • From katecooley on June 08, 2008
    *snort* Narcissa enters, totally uncaring of his predicament as she runs up the accounts in London and all points radiating out. Sweet!

    And it serves Lucius right that he gets distracted.
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  • From mikaela717 on June 06, 2008
    Bahahaha I promise I'll be good :]

    Annnddd I do NOT like the sound of the cruel plan Lucius has thought up, thought I don't really know what it is....

    Anyway, onward onward...
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  • From on June 05, 2008
    I would say poor Luce, but he brought it all on himself.

    I like this story so far and I can't wait for more to be added.
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  • From Jilliane on June 05, 2008

    Yeah,so, just how exactly does this chapter earn it's adult rating? *squints* Oh! There it is! You mean the fondling of Studdy's dick, right? Sorry I missed it the first time....must have blinked....(har har!!!)

    LOL...kidding......it's really a rather brilliant plan Lucius has devised, isn't it? And now that he's gained access to Hogwart's I'm dying to know what the rest of it is. And, knowing you, you'll torture us mercilessly and make us wait to find out! Wretched woman!!! I do have to say, however, I loved the line where Lucius calmly tells his mother that she killed his father, stabbing him whilst he slept. That's so Malfoy, particularly as it was over being denied a dress. Apparently there was no love lost between Lucius and either of his parents. Loved the last line too..."...He grit his teeth." ROFL!!! Poor Lucius! (not really!) Will he ever get it up again?!?


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  • From KaeXLi on June 05, 2008
    ooh i hope we get some snarry smut soon update please
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  • From ANON - Solomon on June 05, 2008
    It ends before it begins Good start where is the rest Please email me when you update Thank you
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  • From cravedom on June 05, 2008
    I am glad you liked the idea of an enchanted dildo, it occurred to me while watching Beauty and the Beast, triggered by the animated candlestick no doubt
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2008
    i love it poor studdy i hope harry get him and i hope that dobby is in the history books
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  • From KaeXLi on June 04, 2008
    aww that poor house elf...but yaya more stories form you loving it all
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  • From katecooley on June 04, 2008
    Go Studdy Go! Aw, the poor thing! Too sweet to belong to Lucius, that's for sure.
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  • From Jilliane on June 04, 2008


    Here's your review, now post the next chapter!!!!! LOL....just kidding. Still, although I'm not that anxious to read about Studdy's dick, the thought of Lucius scampering about naked whilst his mother screeches at him is almost too funny to resist! Also, I'm dying to know what the potion Studdy took did to him. This is a cliffie in disguise, but you're not fooling me, Missy! Update! Immediately!
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  • From Jilliane on June 04, 2008

    It truly is the little things that make all the difference. Things like "Elf" instead of calling him by name, "criminally expensive wine", "a thoroughly annoyed Severus Snape.." and lines like "Around him everyone seemed to be flaunting the fact of their sexual congresses in his face." And only Lucius would think that his limp dick was affecting his ability to be evil! You write Lucius so well!! I love this story, and I can't wait to see what new heights of evil Lucius will reach with the plan he's formulating. What does he have in mind?! And Narcissa, still dying to see what she's going to get up to. You must update soon!



    (and a little shout out to Cravedom for that priceless review she left you! I'm still laughing over that!)
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