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Reviews for Fall Out

By : SickPuppy
  • From katecooley on June 04, 2008
    Ohhhh, and now the elves are against him, too. If he wasn't such a bastard, I'd feel bad for ol' Lucius.

    And oh, no. I don't think he can cope well at all. Look at the Chamber of Secrets! He was ready to AK Harry for losing him DOBBY!

    I can't wait to see what ridiculous plan he's come up with.
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  • From mikaela717 on June 04, 2008
    Lolll Narcissa is a bitch! Of course Lucius aint that much better but REALLY. Update soon!!
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  • From mikaela717 on June 04, 2008
    Lol "pooooooor" Lucius. YAY! Sequel! ^_^
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  • From prettypinkpony on June 03, 2008
    yay sequel i dont know ir you intend to send out update notices to those on the Lentesco mailing list for this fic but ill give you my addy again just incase

    noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
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  • From cravedom on June 03, 2008
    What is wrong with Narcissa? If I had magic my dildo would follow me around barking like a puppy
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  • From katecooley on June 03, 2008
    I have to laugh - Severus puts up with it for DECADES with barely a word to anyone (except poor Madam Pomfrey, for whom the "joy" of routinely jacking him off while he wears THAT face is now over - I see her limboing on a beach after finding out). One week and Lucius is ready to murder. LOL. I hope someone points that out to him as whatever plan he's instigating goes amusingly awry.

    And poor Narcissa. All she wants is love. I'm sure there's a supporting character willing to help her out, isn't there?

    I loved the first part and I already love this part!
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  • From Jilliane on June 03, 2008

    Another update so soon?! I love it when you do as I ask! LOL!

    Lucius has some evil ways, but a woman scorned?? If I were Luc, I think I'd be a little wary of pissing off the Missus right now. The Wrath of Narcissa is nothing to laugh at, I'm sure! Not that I feel sorry for Lucius in any way after what he did to Severus, but I am curious to see what he's got in mind for revenge. And I'm dying to know what Narcissa is up to! Yay! On with the fun an games! Update! You must!!!

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  • From Jilliane on June 03, 2008

    Oh that's it...blame me for your.....yeah..alright, turn about is fair play I suppose. After all, "Green Is The Colour Of...." is all your fault!!!! As is "I'll Be Home For Christmas" come to that! So, there you go! (yeah, yeah, shut it about the shameless plugging!)


    Thanks for the dedication (I think....hmm) and thanks for writing this! I so wanted to read Lucius' reaction/POV and you're delivering, so I'll take the liberty of looking upon this as being just for me...(ahem!)

    Seriously, this is excellent, (and I'm so glad now you didn't show me beforehand!) well written, as always from you, and very Lucius! I love how you've got his arrogance coming through loud and clear, along with his thirst for revenge and you've made him funny too! "..crass infringement of my person." "Especially as it seems I will not be doing any breeding for the foreseeable future." lines like that are so Lucius, and hilarious at the same time. Bravo! I can't wait to read the rest of it! Update! Soon!
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