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Reviews for Bei Mir Bist Du Schon

By : TenderQuaintWitch
  • From catysmom1028 on June 13, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From neelix on June 11, 2008
    Waiting patiently for the promised lemons... I love this story, Severus is very reserved and real... love it!
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  • From Marisol226 on June 08, 2008
    This is really good! The reason I didn't read it before was because I didn't realize it was actually in english (I could of just used my brain and took a peak anyway, but, thats me for you). I can hardly wait to read he end. If you have time, you should add another chapter to " A sad and happy story"; that one made me laugh so hard I almost snorted ice tea out my nose :D
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  • From crinna on June 08, 2008
    it might be the title. that and in the summary you have to stop and explain that the fic is in english. i find with other stories that an exciting summary goes a long way. also it just might be a slow period for readers. there is a lot going on in the real world that can interfere with free reading time.
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  • From Lauriurix on June 08, 2008
    my guess would be lurkers, im lazy and dont comment on it

    but i do like it =)

    keep up the good work =)


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  • From ArabellaSnape on June 08, 2008
    I cannot understand why there is not much interest in this fic, I love it and check daily for updates. Please do not give up on this.
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  • From ozarkmoon on June 08, 2008
    Response to Chapter 6 - possibly. Many titles that are in a foreign language are usually written in that language. You might alter the summary to reflect the translation of the title and mention it is written in english.
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  • From neelix on June 08, 2008
    Nice first snogging session.... Severus is lovely, isn't he??

    Write faster woman....

    LMAO!
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  • From neelix on June 07, 2008
    A rose... he gave her a bloody rose and I blubbed, again.... oh good grief.

    I love this so much, I seriously want you to write like a demon and get the next chapter up... :)

    And yes, I am a trekkie... before Severus, my heart belonged to Jean Luc! haha


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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on June 07, 2008
    So glad you like it! All the songs are really great. I should add links to where the lyrics may be found. A project for later. Yes, Neelix, all my fics come with a kleenex advisory--I own stock. (By the way, I've been meaning to ask, are you a trekkie?) I had this mapped out for six chapters, but chapter four sneaked in while I wasn't looking. We'll see. This might be the first story I finish. How sad is that?
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  • From neelix on June 06, 2008
    wow!! I love this already... so beautiful and so sad. I cried with Severus... and I wrote SS on the bit of paper by my pc... lovely.... update soon, please!!!
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  • From ruckfules84 on June 05, 2008
    I could say bella bella even sir-ir wunderbar
    Each language only helps me tell you how grand you are
    I've tried to explain Bei Mir Bist Du Schon



    love the song....by both the puppini sisters and the andrew sisters...so i was really interested to read the story....so great start...and i cant't wait to read more
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