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Reviews for Broomsticks and Alibis

By : TempestLore
  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2008
    Wow! I'm enjoying your story very much! Hope you update soon! can't wait for the next bit
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  • From ANON - Adriana on June 09, 2008
    awwwww that was a cute ending to chapter 7
    love your work, keep it up
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  • From Camryn31 on June 09, 2008
    hahahaa sooooo cute!!! corny but oh so sweet!!!!! D+H... awwww
    so now we know it wasnt draco..... who was it then??
    krum??... mmm y not....
    dunno, cant wait to find out tho... yaay for ginny! love her!
    so update!
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  • From ANON - Tori in Wonderland on June 09, 2008
    Please update I love this story
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  • From gabby1234 on June 09, 2008
    jennypenny sigh that was great i love the whole pointless sex leading to love plot well i'm not sure thats what your doing but it looks like that to me i happened to really honestly like this and your other work has been awesome to (scorpions kiss-totally awesome) i cannot wait to read more of this story so please update more soon
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  • From starrynite45 on June 09, 2008
    Hey! this story getting better! i love mystery and crime thing! haha, who ever thought that Draco would carved D+H like a love sick puppy!? haha, and it also proved that he's not a killer *grin* i love ur idea!!

    okay keep updating, i almost check for new chapter every 6 hours! :D
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  • From nonentity on June 08, 2008
    I only made it halfway through the first chapter so far. Entertaining premise and banter, but a couple of nitpicks--the Minister is referred to as he, but also comments remembering when he was a blushing bride. Also, Hermione mentally refers to Draco as her boyfriend, but Draco refers to themselves mentally as fuck buddies. I'm not sure if that's a glitch or that's how they view themselves. Faithfulness didn't seem to be a condition of their relationship before though.

    Perhaps this is cleared up later, but Hermione taking on a partner would imply that she and Draco have a private law firm, hired by the Ministry for this case. But the Minister seems to be a boss more than an important client?

    I'm enjoying the characterization with Draco, selfish to the core, but not inherently evil. I like when he attempted to hide and let Hermione face the music alone. The Boy Who Got Away With Everything indeed. I also like that there's still a big line between the Ministry and the War Veterans, and there are different behavior expectations for Purebloods and Muggleborns.
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on June 08, 2008
    FANTASTIC! can't wait for 7!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Flowerchild on June 08, 2008
    I like this story a lot :) I can't wait to find out whodunnit!
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on June 08, 2008
    Great story, I started from chapter 1 and when i realized I had reached the end of ch 5 and there was no ch 6 i was like O_O. So in short i cant wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
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  • From smmz79 on June 08, 2008
    ooohhh this is getting good..... what a great mystery hmmmm.... so i am assuming that this is not a slytherin then bc of the knot tying thing....hmmmmm i am going to have to reread the first story to see if you may have hinted anything then reread this I DO LOVE A MYSTERY WITH GREAT STEAMY SEX!!!!!
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  • From blondpierogi on June 08, 2008
    whoa! this story is great... i love reading it.. next chapter please :-)
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  • From Tenar10r on June 08, 2008
    Wowsers! This is great!
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  • From Camryn31 on June 08, 2008
    yessss hahah yaaaay
    fukin idiot harry!!! hermioen shud reli hex him! or at least punch him or sthn!!!
    what happened to draco tho??? *worried*
    ah what the heck, just get him out of there and in the arms of his fukin brilliant wife!! :D
    update soon
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  • From ANON - Adriana on June 08, 2008
    murder charges!! what!!! lol wow i didn't see that one coming
    great chapter, please keep em married hehe
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