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Reviews for Potion Mishap

By : rachelmary
  • From MrsCakeAkaJane on August 29, 2009
    hay don't leave it there up date soon please
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  • From Makovaso on March 25, 2009
    Good story, please update soon.
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  • From Makovaso on September 11, 2008
    good story.
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  • From Ewe on September 09, 2008
    O.o le gasp this is good.

    and interesting....please write more
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  • From Makovaso on June 24, 2008
    Great!!!
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  • From SassyThing on June 16, 2008
    In my opinion I love what you have so far and I looking forward to the next part!!!
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  • From woof on June 16, 2008
    A few words for you.....grammar, spelling, composition and punctuation. You need a BETA, especially if English is not your native language. Plus the first 4 chapters really need to be one or two chapters. However the plot/story line is a good one.
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  • From Bonecollector on June 15, 2008
    Wow
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  • From dominique1 on June 15, 2008
    that was good can't wait to see what happens how rem and sir just gave harry up are did dumbly take him from them i also like that he has the founders blood him please update soon longer
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  • From RoxanneTheWeretiger on June 14, 2008
    This is an interesting story and i like how its going..... it has flaws. I'm meaning this to be constructive. I really am. First of all you need a beta. Not a bad thing. i think all writers should use a beta. Hell I use a beta.... If I didn't I'm sure I would have people hunting me down. second please add a little more descriptions. I know some peoples writing styles just aren't like that however it helps draw out the length of chapters and as a result the story.
    Please don't get discouraged i really do like this story. please let me know if you are having trouble finding a beta. you can contact me at (kitsune_spyk@yahoo.com). good luck with the rest of the story i look forward to reading it.
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  • From Makovaso on June 12, 2008
    great, please update soon.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on June 12, 2008
    More please. This is rather good so far. I like how Harry still remembered Sirius and Remus. I like that he kept his memories, even though he was deaged. He did keep his memories right? Well, if not, I still like how he recognized Remus and Sirius. The only think I have to say is Remus wouldn't be the one to blame Severus. Sirius would, but I guess how you have it is good too. Is there going to be an arguement over the fact that Harry is staying with Severus? I hope so. Could you please make the chapters longer. That are rather short and I do wish to read a bit more for each chapter. Has Harry started to like Severus since he wanted Severus to pick him up? Well, please update soon. I like this story and will be patiently awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From anniea on June 11, 2008
    wow please update soon *kisses*
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  • From Lucifoy on June 10, 2008
    i like how it goes, even if it lacks of descriptions it is still quite adictive, i specially like the fact that this deaging-potion-fic doesnt involve a small and traumatized Harry getting pitty from everyone that hears how his family treats him among other cliches, it still needs the harsh sarcastic badass potion master, but he has said so little that is difficult to say if he is like that;
    i really hope you can get past that writers block because i am really enjoying this new and fresh idea of deagingpotionfic. dont take too long!

    one thing that can help the fic and your block is to write the ending first, not the whole thing, just the main objective you wish to achive, and start adding some trouble, nice events, romantic ones, angst, funny, etc etc until the characters get to the finish line, and thats how its easier to finish and write more intrincate and long chapters!

    dont take too long!
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  • From alleycat88 on June 10, 2008
    AHAHAHAHA! I loved that line! "Severus this is all your fault." AHAHAHAHAHA! And little HArry recognized Sirius and Remus! AWWWWW! the cuteness! I cant wait for more! Please make them longer!!!!
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