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Reviews for The Lambs

By : AislingSiobhan
  • From Kitkatislovely95 on November 05, 2010
    Damn. I cried so hard at the end. Poor Fenrir. He has to raise the baby without his mate. I loved this story, despite my tears. It was awesome and I am so glad I read it.
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  • From ANON - Jessy on May 02, 2010
    ....*slaps you*
    Did you rewrite the ending or something? I can't remember it being like this the first time I read the story, I'd never reread it if I had remembered that it was an unhappy ending. Unfair.
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  • From digiron91 on February 24, 2010
    I HATE YOU!!!! I just started bawling my eyes out. Harry's death is the worst possible thing that could happen. Now Fenrir is going to die as well...
    Great story though. I haven't had a story make me cry in a long time, so I guess congratulations are in order
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  • From keraizaki on September 26, 2009
    Awesome!! XD I really loved this story, though I would like to know what happened to Eva and Ferrir and Hogwarts after words. The end truly was poetaly beautful!

    (E-mail me a reply at keraizaki@yahoo.com)
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  • From ANON - Oh on July 27, 2009
    Well... damn. Now I remember why I never read this story, Harry dies in the end and I peaked at the end when I read 'character death' in the summary ... But it is a great story :D I really like it, except for perhaps Harry's untimely demise
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  • From Bookworm51485 on June 05, 2009
    Well I did end up with a surprise in this chapter, though it wasn't the gender of Harry's baby. Don't know if you were trying for a surprise but I knew it was going to be a girl. How? I seem to be unable to find boy children in HP stories these days. I've almost resigned myself though I'm still holding out the hope that fanfic authors might remember that boy children do exist, and that with two XY chromosomes combining they're actually more likely than girls.

    The surprise was Harry dying. Was he shot with a silver bullet? Because I was under the impression that werewolves healed really quickly (what with Harry sticking his hand into the fire and pulling it out without even a mark on his skin, minus the blister). Maybe I'm overestimating, but it seems like it bullet wound shouldn't have been able to kill him? I dunno.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 05, 2009
    Oh wow that ending was very unexpected. It has been a great read and I still love your story until now
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 04, 2009
    That ending blind-sided me.
    From a writer's standpoint, that was a good tragic ending. The last couple of lines tied the whole concept of what you were trying to convey together.
    From a reader's standpoint, HOW could you kill Harry???! Just when he got everything that he wanted! He finally gave birth to a beautiful baby girl, he and Fenrir were together, and then you killed him! FUCK!!! I really HATE unhappy endings. With a passion. And I really like Fenrir/Harry stories and this was one of my favorites but then, you killed Harry! ARGH!!!!!!
    I understand you like unhappy endings but DAMN! That was so uncool! **grumbles, grumbles**

    On another note, I hope your hand feels better and thank you for finishing this story despite your hand injury!

    PS Don't take my review hard. I'm not bashing your story, I just wanted Harry to have a long, happy life with Fenrir and have lots of babies! *tears*
    PPS Since you made Lambs have an unhappy ending, PLEASE don't make Butterfly have an unhappy ending!!! Please!!!

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  • From kati on April 29, 2009
    Ooooh! Interesting. Is it just me, or has Lily gone a little... Potty? Aw, I know it's bad, but I couldn't resist. :P I liked this chapter a lot. The story seems to be building up to a climax; I wonder what's going to happen next?

    ~Kati-chan
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  • From ANON - Shain the Otaku of Ireland on April 22, 2009
    Okay I know this is a late question and completely unrelated to the current chapters, but:What exactly is it that is between Severus and Luscius(spelled wrong)? I think you mentioned in an early chapter that they lived in the same house, though I could be wrong. Are they just close friends? They seem to be everywhere together. Don't mind me, I'm an absurd SS/LM fan. So I randomly jumped to conclusions.

    I love the story by the way. Well written and well thought out!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 21, 2009
    Only one more chapter after this? It'll probably be so epic!
    Lily just never quits! Honestly! You would think that banishment would have given her the hint...
    Anyway, awesome chapter. Keep going!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on April 21, 2009
    Wow I never expected Remus to get violent like that but then again his mate was killed. Damn Lily just doesnt get a clue does she. Cant wait for the next part
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 27, 2009
    ARGH! Remus always get the short end of the stick. I was looking forward to eventually seeing Tonks as a werewolf and then BAM she's dead.
    I hope Fenrir will catch Ginny and make her confess that Lily was involved. I cannot wait to see Lily get punished.
    Keep going!
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on March 27, 2009
    love it and I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - kunitsu on March 27, 2009
    Oh damn poor Remus, just when he found his mate. Lily just doesnt know when to cut her loses, I just hope nothing will happen to Harry or his child.

    You are doing some unexpected things here and I like it
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