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Reviews for The Lambs

By : AislingSiobhan
  • From ANON - Pillan on July 18, 2008
    Love the story :) though, I do have one question.. Are you swedish? I mean, both Hinder and Bodies Without Organs are swedish and I don't think BWO are that big out of the country.. Oh well, it doesn't really matter. Love the story, please Update soon :)
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  • From Rockyshores on July 04, 2008
    OOO, can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 29, 2008
    Very interesting story.
    update!
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  • From ANON - Ameera on June 25, 2008
    Yay!! Moremoremore please. I can't wait for Lilly and James' little secretive act explode in their faces, especially after kicking Remus out like that.
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  • From kati on June 24, 2008
    Oh! So close! You are taunting us, lovely author, but because you write so well I suppose I can forgive you. ^_^ I really liked the portrayal of Harry here, how childish and spoilt he is. I can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Saeadame on June 24, 2008
    I was goes to leave it alone, but I suppose I'm a little annoyed with your rather gross misinterpretation of my previous review.

    It was curt, I will grant you that. However, I believe that if you were taking it in the spirit it was meant, you would see to the point of the review: I was giving you some constructive criticism. As criticism, I don't believe you should be expecting flowery praise. I have given reviews that have been criticism, but still perhaps more pleasant, however I have also given plenty in the same tone. The authors have, until now, thanked me for my opinion whether they agreed or not and, if they felt they could improve, they may change; if not, they don't.

    Firstly, I wasn't saying "flash forward so Harry can have sex", I was saying "flash forward because if Harry is a baby or a child he will be unable to understand relationships except the parental or friendships" - that is, he would view Fenrir as a father figure, rather than a friend or someone to have a relationship with when he was older.

    Perhaps, you viewed my review was "not nice" because you felt I didn't have anything pleasant to say: this is untrue. At the end of my review, I supported an out of character Fenrir, stating that if he were in character it would be difficult for him to have any redeeming qualities - the last book ruined the fannon view of Fenrir, and broke his character down into someone who could not be seen any way other than negatively.

    I was, I suppose, "curt" rather than "perhaps somewhat pleasant" because I have found myself to dislike your stories as a whole: I have yet to be able to read past 7 or 8 chapters of any of your stories. Your ideas are excellent: unique and well thought out. However, as the stories continue, major characterization flaws and a personal dislike of your writing style cause my interest to wain. This story and The Erlking are actually the best - Harry's personality is begun from scratch, and therefore I don't feel there is much character flaw because the situations he is in would cause him to be the way he is.

    To make a long review short, I was mildly offended that you were offended by my review: perhaps you have not had much criticism, and consequently chose to view it as a threat to your ideas, when in fact it is merely an opinion. A criticism is perhaps more difficult to ignore than a flame, as flames are generally illogical and badly communicated, but you must understand as an author that it is entirely up to you whether you listen to the opinion given to you or not.

    I leave you with some thoughts: plot is not everything. Harry Potter has the most fanfiction base of any other book - perhaps any other series at all. Why? Because J.K. Rowling's ideas are excellent, but her writing is not. Long, plot-altering stories are not written about good, well written books - because there is very little that can be made better.

    I hope, at this time, that you decided to read this with an open mind.

    Thank you for your time.
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  • From mls1971 on June 23, 2008
    love this story!!!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!
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  • From KagetsuAsame on June 23, 2008
    More more! I can't wait for the enxt part!
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  • From calmchick on June 23, 2008
    Great chapter, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From on June 23, 2008
    Totally on the edge of my seat...with the thrilling anticipation...and POW.
    Fenrir doesn't have Harry. So close too.
    Loved the way Harry felt safe and found Fenrir attractive.
    Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - keyonnamc on June 16, 2008
    I love this story. I especially love the end of chapter 2 when Harry meet Draco for the first time. I keep reading that part over and over.

    Great work.
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  • From ANON - Rokkis on June 16, 2008
    Yes!! another FGHP! There really are faaaaaaar too few of them:D

    Cheers!
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  • From kati on June 16, 2008
    You don't deserve them? WTF? That was an amazing chapter! You got off to a shaky start with this one, but the latest chapter was great, very enjoyable to read. Harry is so damn cute! And I loved how nice the Dursleys were to him: makes a change. I think that was a good relection of what the Dursleys might of been like if they's thought a little harder about their actions. They were just a scared powerless family thrown into a huge battle that they knew nothing about, and all they knew was that they wanted the best for their son. I think the Durslyes, without Harry, would have been a wonderful, happy family. It would have been nice if they had been as loving to Harry as they were to Dudley, like we can see here. I really am looking forward to the next chapter, DON'T GIVE UP!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Saeadame on June 15, 2008
    I think this story would have been far better if you had skipped ahead after the first chapter. I really can't see where you're going with this - Harry's still a child and so this story will just end up being a long, drawn out lead up to something that can't happen until Harry's older anyway. If you had just skipped to when Harry was 13 or something for the second chapter, or maybe had a chapter of like a "flash forward" with a bunch of small but important stories that occur in the time leading up to the main plot it would have been better. To me, the real story can't begin until there's the opportunity for Fenrir to get Harry away at a time when Harry is also old enough to understand and be able to act on what's happening. I don't really care to much about the OOC Fenrir - frankly if you want to write anything of value he has to be otherwise he's just a vicious, petty, sneering dog of a thing that isn't worth the time.

    Anyway. That's just what I think.
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  • From ANON - anon on June 15, 2008
    I love the story so far. Don't be down on yourself or the story. please keep going!
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