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Reviews for The Lambs

By : AislingSiobhan
  • From KagetsuAsame on June 15, 2008
    You do too deserve them! Keep going! I look forward to the next part!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 14, 2008
    Ok I just hope that what Harry and Draco have is really just a friendship since Fenrir already has problems. Damn I wonder when they will discover Peter.
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  • From ANON - M. on June 13, 2008
    Oh hush, you deserve reviews. I liked it and I liked your Fenrir.
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  • From kyuubifreak on June 13, 2008
    i have just find this story, cannot wait for the next chapter
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  • From on June 13, 2008
    Im so frustratedly torn here.
    I so pushing towards Fenrir to be with his mate...and to read... everything is tearing them away from eachother.
    Ugh.
    As always...I cant wait to read the next chapter.

    ...Im so happy you write your chapters long.

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  • From Secretx3 on June 13, 2008
    Oh, don't be so harsh on yourself. I think you did a good job on this chapter and it was certainly interesting. I was half expecting an abused Harry for those 20 some years, and then you went and made him treated like a normal person. Talk about something different. I actually like your Fenrir, he's nice while still being canon. I think the super-nice Fenrir's are a little weird and very unrealistic. Keep up the work, and stop being so hard on yourself. Just find yourself a nice beta and you'll be all right.
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  • From ANON - null on June 13, 2008
    i loveeee this story. fenrir/harry is a very hard pairing to find great stories, but this one seems to be so good. pleaesee update asap! =]
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  • From ANON - Sushine on June 08, 2008
    This is a poorly written story. Though the idea is good, your orginization and grammatical skills are horrible. You should never use the term "but I'll get to that in a moment" or "as mentioned before". That is a sign of a weak writter. I'm not trying to flame you or anything, but you really must work on eliminating these lead-in's from your writing.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 07, 2008
    This is an awesome story so far. Really intriguing. I loved how you combined the canon history with your story's history.
    Keep going!
    update!
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  • From lacuselda on June 07, 2008
    Poor Remus, James is really hotheaded... And I guess that Wormtail is the same rat too...
    I hope that Harry won't turn into a same hotheaded person, that way he wouldn't forsake
    Remus and his mate... Although the mate part I can imagine that it would take some time
    until Harry actually accepts the fact. You know, if Harry's parents don't tell him about
    the werewolves then what about his elemental powers?
    Thanks for the chapter anyways :)! I hope to see more soon, and great job on finishing
    the Erlking... at first I always read it 'erkling' and it kinda stuck on me even though
    later I noticed it was erlking... :D
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on June 06, 2008
    I am so angered of the situation and full of hope that Fg/Hp will be together.
    And the 'truth' will be told to Hp...
    So full of emotions and suspense...its killing me.
    Love it all the way...
    I love this pairing without a doubt and glad you started on this fic.
    Again...as always, cant wait to read more.

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  • From ANON - kati-chan on June 06, 2008
    This is truly wonderful! I can't wait for the succeeding chapters!! This is exactly what I was looking for when I started surfing today, so thankyou for sharing your work with us. The only thing I would change is the description "thin". When I imagine Greyback I see a tall, very VERY muscular, broad chested, rugged man, but this guy sounds a bit weedy... is this an aspect of the story you might consider changing...? If not, I completely understand; its your work, not mine, but that would make me really happy! Good luck with writing the next chapter. xxxx
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  • From KagetsuAsame on June 06, 2008
    I look forward to the next part, keep it up, great start.
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  • From Madhater on June 06, 2008
    oh i want to see what happens next. please update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 06, 2008
    Oooooh this is very interesting already. I like how arrogant Fenrir is

    I am looking forward to reading more
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