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By : neelix
  • From 666devil on June 17, 2008
    I LOVED 19. It was fun, fun. The bare arse was hysterical. And the way you got him to say the dreaded phrase was brilliant. Clever and realistic. YaY.
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  • From 666devil on June 17, 2008
    I LOVED 19. It was fun, fun. The bare arse was hysterical. And the way you got him to say the dreaded phrase was brilliant. Clever and realistic. YaY.
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  • From 666devil on June 17, 2008
    Hi Neelix,
    just read this through in one hit (!)

    I like the premise and your writing, of course. Your original character and her methods were terrific and very intriguing. Thoughts/feelings do shape the reality, don't they?

    There are a couple of plot points that feel jarring (but that's not a big deal), but apart from that, it's a very enjoyable read. I love your style; it's very creative.
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  • From Larrabee on June 17, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I love how hapy and light-hearted the moment was for Severus to proclaim his love. A joyous occasion indeed.

    Love this story.
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  • From KellyJCR on June 17, 2008
    Thank the gods. We are finally getting somewhere. I love that Severus is misunderstanding the words and actions that Hermione is sending. Unintentionally Hermione forgets that Severus has never had these feeling before and, even though he is looking for a lifetime comitment he is emotionally immature. I loved this chapter the most so far because you could smell the fustration and rejection a mile away. Well written!!! Can't wait for the update.
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  • From on June 16, 2008
    Oh man...men. Enjoyable, thank you for the udpate!
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  • From ilke on June 16, 2008
    Poor Severus is right! And poor Hermione too. Kudos to our girl for holding onto her values and not giving in (even if she does eventually). This is a lovely story and I am enjoying it thoroughly! Keep up the good work!


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  • From KellyJCR on June 16, 2008
    Wow just when I thought I knew where this was going you throw me of track. I thought for sure Severus would just give in and let Hermione in. However, Severus being who he is has to be hard headed and garded. I guess there is going to be a bit of drama coming up as far as Hermione is concerened. Great job I just love your wriring as usual. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From Tenar10r on June 16, 2008
    Poor Severus!
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  • From nastygrl on June 16, 2008
    I just love this story. I've been enjoying the slow build-up, the tension, the flow of it all. You write beatifully, and while your work is easy to read, it is by no means simplistic. It takes real talent to achieve that, which I believe you have. Thanks for sharing, and I look forward to reading the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 15, 2008
    ok, this is good so far, i really like it,can you please post more soon, and lots more at that..keep up the good work
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  • From on June 15, 2008
    It was almost strange to read him crying, but it was necessary and made sense. There is a real healing going on and you are doing it justice. Thanks for the update!
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  • From Jocelyn25 on June 15, 2008
    *stops sobbing long enough to write a review*

    Oh neelix, this was...wonderful. And i sincerely hope you will come back to this topic again, since it shows such a sweet vulnerable site of Severus and it makes me want to hug and kiss him to make him feel better. *sighs*
    Wonderful job as usually!

    Thank you !!!!

    Love
    Jocy
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  • From angelnomiko on June 15, 2008
    wow that was awsome ... please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From neelix on June 14, 2008
    Thanks for the feedback everyone.

    I wasn't infering that Romany blood means people are seers... it was more in relation to the firtune cards Valentine used. The Seer thing is seperate but perhaps I didn't make it that clear... Minerva is a Seer in my fic, but she is NOT Romany... just to clarify!


    will update soon, bear with me!
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