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Reviews for Staggered

By : fbowden
  • From JesterJester on December 16, 2010
    Very nice!!! If I hadnt know that this was a threesome I would have believed Severus death and maaan that progress was so awesome! How Draco had this conflict with his need and then giving Harry to Severus and wow the threesome was awesome
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  • From Darkless on February 02, 2009
    Absolutely loved it. Wonderful writing skills.
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  • From sweetciel on July 18, 2008
    Holy hell!!!! That was hottt! *frantically wipes blood dripping from nose onto keyboard*
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  • From SickPuppy on June 14, 2008
    Holy crap, honey! That was hotness times by volcano times by sweltering! Phew!

    I was so pleased when Snape and Harry had their conversation, it was great to read all the complications being explored. It was all beautifully written, as always! SP
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  • From Jilliane on June 13, 2008


    *can't think coherently!*
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  • From Jilliane on June 13, 2008
    (Part 3)

    "I am deeply saddened that you do not recognise the distinctive atmosphere, Mr. Potter, given that you spent numerous happy detentions here.


    "Sorry to disappoint you, Potter, but I can assure you, I am no dream...."

    "Indeed. How incredibly astute of you to work it out, but as usual you are only partway correct..."

    "Shall I apologise, Potter? Did you think death had improved my personality? I can assure you it had no such beneficial side-effects."



    The best thing, and the thing I love most about your stories, Flic, is that Severus is always, and unapologetically, Severus. Excellent!


    More please!!!



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  • From Jilliane on June 12, 2008
    (Part 2)


    Yay! You updated! This story is quickly becoming an addiction. It's lovely, melancholy, sad, and bittersweet. So well written, as always from you, Flic. I feel sorry for both of them, but actually sorrier for Draco, strangely enough.

    These two lines have me deeply intrigued:

    "...this is so inherently wrong and Snape's going to kill him, but..."

    and

    "Another day, full of deception and not-quite-lies, of watching the man beside him silently falling apart."

    Hmmm.....



    Oh my goodness! Please update soon!!!
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  • From Jilliane on June 12, 2008

    Drat!!!

    That should be "grief" in my previous posting, not "gried". AFF should allow editing of reviews!

    Please hurry and update!
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  • From sparrowswing on June 11, 2008
    Yet another example of your brilliance that leaves me desperate for more. I love the emotion in this, and I can't wait to see where you take it.
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  • From Jilliane on June 11, 2008

    Yay! Another treat!

    I can't wait to see where you're going with this, and what insights Draco has for Harry concerning Severus. Will Harry and Draco's gried draw them together, cause I think Draco is grieving too, in his own way. Or will it be a completely surprise ending. Oh! Please hurry and update! I'm captivated!
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  • From dominique1 on June 11, 2008
    i like it i like how harry oves sev its sad that sev died but i hope harry gets to be with him in heaven update soon
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  • From dominique1 on June 11, 2008
    i like it i like how harry oves sev its sad that sev died but i hope harry gets to be with him in heaven update soon
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