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By : fatedsoul
  • From purpleann on January 24, 2010
    LOVE what you've done so far, and I CANNOT WAIT to see Ron dominating Lavender....omg omg omg that's going to be awesome. As for the adults, I don't think you should include them, I like the idea of dark!Trio being a little secret from the grownups. I would not be opposed to including the Patil twins and maybe some other kids from other houses...Pansy for Ron, Anthony or Ernie for Hermione. Cho for Harry, maybe. Good times!
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  • From ANON - J on January 24, 2010
    Hermionie dominating Snape would be great. Your doing a great job and I cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - same anon on January 24, 2010
    i also agree with the person above me on pansy being added and ron dominating ginny. (:
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  • From ANON - anon on January 24, 2010
    i wouldn't be too interested in snape joining in, but i would like to read more about what's going on with harry & ginny and what guy she might give to harry to screw around with. (maybe the creevey brothers? or just colin? or any other guy you can think of that has good relations with harry). i also really want to see these kinks that ginny has that scared dean away. but anyways, i love this fic
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  • From flatliner15 on January 24, 2010
    i think you should keep it in the younger crowd at hogwarts, never understood why anyone would want to bring the likes of snape into anything, mostly i see the patils, pansy, random students,... those kind of participants. What i don't understand is if ginny is under hermione or just another free dom, and just why ron doesn't want to dom ginny, just once for all the crap she's done and to show that he and hermione are number 1 because ginny seemed a little too cocky, making demands and such, don't think hermione or ron should allow that
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  • From JAngelDreams on January 23, 2010
    Adults....it depends on how they would be involved. I don't think any of them should be personally involved in Ron and Hermione's game(s), as in sexually part of their play. Severius could have his own kinks and we find that out, and he looks the other way or something with Ron and Hermione's play. Dumbledore and Minerva...can't really see them being dark in this fic. The Bloody Baron...although not an adult in that he's just a ghost, could probably find his way into something. Serius and Remus might show up...as could Lucius and Tonks. Don't really see any of the other teachers getting involved at all...just my personal viewpoint.
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  • From Elphaba on January 23, 2010
    loved it! Bad cliffy!
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  • From JAngelDreams on January 23, 2010
    Strange, the calendar states that it's still January, yet a could have sworn my birthday came early! Chapter, chapters, three chapters to read at once, yummy! I am bouncing in my chair to see how Lavender deals with meeting Ron and becoming his new slave (insert evil cackle of glee). I wonder who Blaise was getting tormented by...they seem a little too sadistic for Draco, but I'd still like to find out how Blaise felt about the experience.
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  • From JAngelDreams on January 23, 2010
    I wasn't expecting that, especially not from Ginny. Oh, what other surprises do you have in store for us?! I'd love to see the Twins get involved, somehow, just to have them in the fic. Like where it's going, can't wait for ch.12 (if it's got you excited, I REALLY want to read it :-)
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  • From Elphaba on January 22, 2010
    Oh my isn't this getting interesting!!!
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  • From Elphaba on January 21, 2010
    Woo-Hoo! Update. I am liking a demented 'Mione!
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  • From JAngelDreams on January 21, 2010
    Yippee! A new chapter! What fun! I wonder how Lavender will take to Draco...or rather, I wonder how she will take to Ron ;-)
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  • From KaelHyun on January 21, 2010
    IMO I have a valid reason to dispise Yaoi: There's way to much of it on this sight I mean come on people!! (I'm sorry I just needed to get that off my chest; coming on this sight looking for some Het pairings is just to damn rare...)
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  • From JAngelDreams on January 16, 2010
    Update! I can't wait how Blaise fits into everything ;-)
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  • From Elphaba on December 26, 2009
    Oh I Liked it too! Interesting Love bringing Blaise in on it!


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