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Reviews for Sins

By : fatedsoul
  • From Elphaba on August 18, 2008
    Wonderful chapter. I was reading this a FF.net but glad I found it here with additional chapters!
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  • From ANON - genna on August 17, 2008
    I read Sins/Golden Sins.

    I think I understand the psych now. Before it was about causing hurt and being equal to sexual enjoyment. Blah, yuck, what in the hell.

    Now I think this is a power ride story mixed with dominance. I've never quite got the S&M thing. The way it reads it would never be my thing but at least now I get what you are trying to say.

    What I don't get is how rape transforms itself into a dom/sub relationship. Is it that it is supposed to be Draco's quiet need that Hermione has picked up on? For me, this is transferring one need for another. Draco needs discipline because he has whatever he wants. Hermione bogards him into something bent and he defines an unmet need. When I read Chapter 11, Draco is trying to transform his fixation into something normative. Enter Blaise.

    What in the world does Ron get out of loaning out his girlfriend? Giving her what she wants? For how long and under what circumstances?
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  • From ANON - genna on August 17, 2008
    I have read this story with my mouth open and my brow furrowed. I am trying to figure out when torture became sexy?

    I guess it takes all kinds but ugh. I kept thinking that the *game* was a joke (maybe not my cup of tea) but Malfoy would be embraced and protected. No. Not in this story. Rape has never been fun for anyone I have known or talked to, this story is unreal.

    After reading this, I can honestly say a school where this happened and was tolerated would be less than a magical place in my world. Good luck with your world.
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  • From Ribenataste on July 31, 2008
    Enjoying this, showing the Dark side of gryffindor! And of the trio. Keep up the good work!
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  • From Mellow03 on July 24, 2008
    Hi, good story you wrote. Can put blood in it and anal-blow-job that is forceful but to submission from Draco with other boys. Finger-anal-job from either boys and girls to Draco, can include those three too. Can include that not just Ron as lover but Harry as lover to Hermione.
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  • From flatliner15 on July 24, 2008
    hey, i've already read the rest of the story, and i really like it, especially the fact that ron is a dom in his own way, onnly subject to herlione, but in your last chapter with ginny, it would be so much cooler if she got subjected to hermione and maybe even ron, him dominating his sister would be soo hot
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 24, 2008
    Of course I had to drop some love....I really like the slow descent into evil we see going on with the trio. They're getting worse, and Draco seems to have some fight in him but knows his limits. I love that he's resistant to Harry though. It cracks me up. We'll see how long that lasts...
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 09, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From luvhp on June 30, 2008
    wow, they are really messing with poor Draco, lovely! You're doign a great job, and so is Hermione, lol.

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  • From mlui on June 30, 2008
    A very interesting story! Please update again soon!
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  • From LittleMissPrincess on June 27, 2008
    Wheeeee
    I love it
    And I'm keeping track of this story
    Hehehe, it's great how the golden trio are all naughty and bad, lol.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 22, 2008
    Still hot! I love that Hermione can admit to what she did to Ron and Harry and that they want to play to. This sets the scene for some diabolically wicked play and I know you have plenty of that in store. It's about time that Draco had the game turned around on him. Can't wait for this progress : )
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2008
    I think I've seen this somewhere before....
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  • From luvhp on June 12, 2008
    LOVED IT!!
    There are not enough naughty Hermione stories and I absolutely loved that she got Malfoy good!! I do hope you continue...I'd love to see more.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 11, 2008
    Yay!! LOVE the Dark!Trio...I can't wait to start this story again and travel to whatever end you lead us to....
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