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Reviews for Blood Debt

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  • From smmz79 on June 14, 2008
    wow what a chap well i do have to agree though ron is good for the drama part of the story... ok so i cannot wait for the next chap but please do not leave us on a cliffie i pull my hair out everytime i read a chap and am left in suspense.... great job!!!!
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  • From leValkyrie on June 13, 2008
    damn.....
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  • From Phoenix2000 on June 13, 2008
    So far I like the story line with Ron. Not sure I like what is going through Draco's mind though. But does he love her or lust after her - seems like lust to me. I understand the Lift/Blood Debt but the literal control he has over Hermione?? Just not sure yet. It is too OOC for Hermione to let that happen. But I will keep reading so keep writing!! I hope you put alot of details into the contract.
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  • From leValkyrie on June 13, 2008
    so i've been doing some catch up...it has got to suck to owe a life debt to someone and not know when its going to come in but if its a debt to draco it cant be all that bad right? lol. i wonder what is in store. second of all the whole debbie "i'll put glamour on tonight and play any role u want lover" kind of thing reminds me of that episode from charmed but thats off track lol. i cant wait to see what you have planned for the debt. what a wonderful way to get it rollling with a demanding Draco. gotta love it.
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  • From tawright on June 13, 2008
    Love it so far. Keep up the good work. Update Soon

    Tale
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  • From mystique on June 13, 2008
    Yay! thanks for updating so soon, but please cassandra don't tell me Ron is going to do something terrible to hermione in the next chapter! I hope draco will be there to protect her!
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on June 12, 2008
    Very good start up. Draco shouldnt want her too submissive I think
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  • From longxlostx on June 12, 2008
    I must say, I really enjoyed this story. We seem to have similar views on how Dracos personailty is. Its actuallly somewhat unnerving, because Draco is almost the same way in one of my stories. But I like how you've made Ron, and the Life Debt. It's very intriging. I adore how you've set up the situation between them as well, and I'm very excited to see what happens when she goes to the Manor =] Update soon? Longxlostxwords@yahoo.com , if you could e-mail me when you update I'd appreciate it =]
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  • From Larrabee on June 12, 2008
    Ok, so Ron is NUTZ! lol. And idky but I love it and it works.

    But what I am NAAAT getting is Draco's feelings? He seems way to content just bossing her around... I mean in the bedroom its alright but in all aspects of life? idk. I don't think Hermione would take it... especially not if invoked by a bond or contract. Knowing that she has to obey would make her unhappy I think.

    Anywho, can't wait for more... Harry and the Weasley's should put Ron in Anger Management. haha! Can't wait for more.

    Kudos on the grammar and spelling... what an easy read.
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  • From shelagh on June 12, 2008
    Great job!!!!Update soon please.
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  • From smmz79 on June 12, 2008
    yeaaaahhh you updated this story rocks... i love the control that draco has on hermione already and ooohhh what is going to happen the next day this should be good... boy ron is a jerk and i feel no pity for him i like a bad ron where draco has to defend hermione in one way or another i love it please do not be gone long....
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 12, 2008
    Damn, you're a fast updater. AWESOME. And Yay, he's gonna collect on his debt!! I cannot wait until 10am tomorrow. Sounds like Ron's a bit kinky...can't see what you're gonna write in terms of him. If you must bash Ron to get there, then so be it, although it will sadden me, I will not turn away, not when we're this close to Hermione being Draco's loveslave for life : ) I love the way you're writing her reactions to him and how he's thinking about her.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 12, 2008
    See, I'm not supposed to be reading any more new stories, I'm supposed to be writing...but I couldn't stay away from this yummy ass summary!!! I LOVE it so far, can't wait until he makes his claim and to see how Hermione reacts to it...this promises to be a delicious ride, please update...whatever you need to keep writing...reviews, cookies, a whip? : )
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  • From SlytherinIcePrincess on June 12, 2008
    wow...the story line is amazing so far. I really cannot wait until Draco and Hermione get together. Keep writing.
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  • From mystique on June 12, 2008
    Thank You, Thank you, Thank You!!!!!! I am so glad you have decided to update!!! Please keep more chapters coming I can't wait for more!!!!!! I love the detail of how you made Hermione only for Draco!!!! That is slyly possessive in itself!!!! can't wait for the end result! Without a doubt this is shaping up to be one of the best Draco/Hermione dominating fics out there!!!! Keep continuing it please!
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