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Reviews for Blood Debt

By : firedragonsjewel
  • From jket87 on June 12, 2008
    I'm really liking the story so far. I think that it's a really interesting plot so far. I can't wait to find out what his favor is going to be!
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 12, 2008
    Very nice start! Is this going to be a MLC-fic? I love those! Anyhow, I will be watching out for updates :)
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  • From chickaboo on June 12, 2008
    I really like this so far. And I can't wait to see where you take it. Hope you update soon!
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  • From Larrabee on June 12, 2008
    I like the way you started this story... very cannon descriptions of the characters. Especially Ron's reaction.
    It would be easier to read the story if there was more space between paragraphs. And since it is a "working title" I think you should stress on what kind of debt it is... because its not exactly a Blood Oath... no oath was made and no blood was shed. More like a promise or a vow... and also, depending on what he is going to ask for.
    Anywho, wonderful storyline, I can't wait for more. And the grammar = awesome.
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  • From skydancer on June 12, 2008
    well...here'sa big basket of chocolate covered feedback for you! delightful start and hope the plot bunnies are bouncing all over your keyboard! ( and not leaving poopies behind.....)
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  • From goldentrio on June 12, 2008
    I'm really interested in this story, please write more. :)
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  • From lukymiko on June 12, 2008
    you've peeked my interest... I want more. You're last story was really good and ironically enough I was reading it when I came across this today. I'd love to see where this story might go.
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  • From lovelytiger on June 11, 2008
    I can't wait to see here this story goes. Hope you write more soon!
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  • From bananasforyou on June 11, 2008
    need more pleaseee!
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  • From bananasforyou on June 11, 2008
    i like it lots. more please!
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