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Reviews for The Last Gift

By : AndreaLorraine
  • From LaBibliographe on November 26, 2008
    Chapter 3: Cripes! I
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on November 25, 2008
    OOOEEEH don't let us wait too long for an update!!
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on November 25, 2008
    Dramatic chapter. Lucius's grief is virtually tangible. What could Voldemort take from Lucius now that he has lost everything? Has he discovered Severus's loyalties?
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  • From ANON - Tina on November 22, 2008
    I like your Voldemort. I know, it sounds totally insensitive and positively hate-inducing, but I was quite disappointed with Rowling's portrail of the big bad villain in the last book. Well, at least near the end. I mean, we get this menacing, smart, cautious evil being over the six books and when the moment of truth finally comes, he is nothing but an incapable fool. I liked that last part of ch4, very chilling and every bit evil.
    Loved the rest, of course. I like the slow details, the backstory you added for Lupin. He's one of my favourite characters and I was more than pleased by the attention you gave him. I can't neglect the way you showed Lucius's grief... very good, loved the way Hermione doesn't know what to do all the time. She always struck me a bit like someone who doesn't understand social relations very well, so she finds herself helpless when having to deal with sadness, angst and worry that are not her own. Proof of how Harry always avoids her in the books when he's in one of those states.
    Great story, keep going and I'll always be there to lap it up like a hungry kitten. Kuddos!
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on November 22, 2008
    As always I am impressed by this chapter! You accomplish to paint an image of a very human Lucius. Although he's grieving badly and breaking down at one point, he still seems to be a strong personality. I like that!

    Nice update!
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  • From LCGrabski on November 22, 2008
    Yet another absolutely amazing, talented, wonderful story you've produced FlowersBecomeScreens. You are definitely a favorite author of mine and I simply cannot wait for the next chapter. By my assessment you don't have nearly enough reviews for this intricate story. This is a truly terrific tale.
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  • From ANON - Mia on November 21, 2008
    Gahh!! Painful and wrenching and haunting and terrible and beautiful and graceful. I am awed. You have written the Skittles candy of chapters here. Taste the Painbow. Just Wow.

    ~Mia
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  • From mageemi on November 21, 2008
    OMG!!!! Voldybutt is sooooo evil. I wonder what he has in store for Lucius? Will he be able to find Hermione's parents? Will Dudly escape, maybe find his way to Harry's side and help in the fight somehow?
    I felt so bad for Lucius' despair, he can't help but feel guilty.
    Can't wait for more.
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  • From tsorg on November 21, 2008
    Excellent story so far. It's amazing. I can't wait to see where you go with this and of course I love the intense attraction between Lucius and Hermione. Thank you! I can't wait to read more.
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  • From happybunny on November 21, 2008
    Wonderful chapter, I think this is one of the best characterizations of a grieving Lucius that I have read. I have never suffered personal loss on the same level, but your depiction seems to be very accurate from what I have read and observed in others.

    Something I would like to see more of, if it fits within your framework, is how Lucius' soul affects Hermione. You mentioned her taste for coffee and her reflexes. It would be interesting to see how far the effects go.

    Voldemort was absolutely chilling at the end of this chapter. Sometimes he seems like a menace that will inevitable be beaten, but your Voldemort is disconcertingly in control of the situation.

    I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on November 20, 2008
    Woow, I love your story!! It's just a pity you update so few., it makes me lose my 'bond' with the story! You do write beautifully and I love the storyline.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on November 18, 2008
    Fascinating. Each is irresistible to the other. Great chemistry.
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  • From ANON - ladydeathfaerie on November 15, 2008
    oh, that was a lovely chapter. explanations and a hint
    of smut. very nicely done.

    thanks for sharing. i look forward to more.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From wishywashy on November 15, 2008
    this is good. i like it. very different. i wasn't sure about it at first but once i started reading it was great. i look forward to reading more.
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  • From angelnomiko on November 15, 2008
    wow that was some ...please pleas update soon .. later for now

    angel
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