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Reviews for The Last Gift

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2008
    This is one of the best LM/HG stories that I've read.
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  • From ANON - Mia on October 27, 2008
    This may be a bit presumptuous of me, but of course you must keep going. You can't leave it there. That first chapter was incredible by itsself. But this new addition...wow. Please, I am begging you, as long as your plot bunny lives, please continue this story. It is painfully good. Please.

    ~Mia
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  • From LadyDisdain on October 27, 2008
    Yes, keep going. Definitely!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on October 27, 2008
    FBS

    That was an awesome second chapter. I love that Hermione and Lucius are connected somehow and i was chuckling and Snape and Harry's mutual hate....

    The Imperio, and the bubble and the fiendfyre used on Voldemort...Absolutely Brilliant!!!!!

    Can't wait to see where your muse takes this!

    Lady B*
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  • From chickaboo on October 27, 2008
    Should you keep going? Uh.....Heck yeah! This is awesome, I can't wait to see what happens!! Please do continue!
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  • From ANON - Lelir on October 27, 2008
    I love this story: it has a good plot, well depicted characters and a tasteful sex scene.
    Bravo!
    Please, continue this story!!!
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 27, 2008
    Oh I am so excited you picked this story back up and extended it. Fantastic effort. I would love to see you continue. You came up with a very different plot concept.
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  • From voraciousreader on October 27, 2008
    Yes! Keep going, going, going. I like this WAAAY better than the actual ending of book Seven. May I suggest the use of Hypothermia as a means of safe (sort of) stopping Harry's heart to produce clinical death? Madame Pomfrey would be able to supervise the procedure AND fix Severus' Brachial nerves. Risky, but legitimately used in cardiac surgeries.
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  • From ariannz on October 27, 2008
    Yes, keep going...the first chapter works well not just as a stand alone piece but as the opening of a longer story. Chapter 2 leaves me wanting to read more (which is as it should be)

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  • From ANON - ashmo21 on October 27, 2008
    Oh My.... This is definitely promising!!! I can't wait to read the rest!!!...is there going to be an upadate for 'hungry, thirsty, crazy' soon???... Anywho, this was a great way to get a fix of your writing 'til your next update!!!

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  • From wudelfin on October 20, 2008
    this is the best i read yet!!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 14, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Damiana on August 28, 2008
    Awesome! Superbly written and I, for one, would love to read any sequel to this.
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  • From on August 05, 2008
    Scary and so much more. *trembles a bit* Well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2008
    Oh my god! This is beatiful! Really, really beatiful! It might be the most realistic and honest story of how Hermione and Lucius could overcome their history I ever read.

    Even if I am a great Lucius/Hermione (well and Draco/Hermione) fan, most stories just lack that. How could they forgive each other. How could SHE forgive the pain and the suffering? And how could HE overcome his prejudices? What could be his reason? Just the way you described it. It might be the only possiblity ther is...

    Sabine
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