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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part 2: Nimue's Island

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From chickaboo on June 16, 2008
    Wow. Hermione is seriously buried in denial when it comes to Lucius eh? But I can her point on Severus. She may not love him per se but she does care deeply for him and would never want to cause him pain. So here's my answer, tell Lucius to get used to sharing and keep them both! lol Great update, as always I'm on the edge of my seat and eager for more!
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 16, 2008
    Oh gosh, as always, this is just wonderful! You are definitely one of my favourite authors! I feel totally torn about this story. In part one I felt like cheering for Hermione and Lucius, but now it seems like Severus is only so careful not to appear too emotionally involved, because she might get scared and run off. I hope he will not get hurt badly in the end. Mmhh, they are really good friends, right? And they do seem to be a bit of ying and yang as lovers. Lucius did say, that he doesn
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  • From KellyJCR on June 16, 2008
    I absolutly love the line "Alright... so I guess that is a hint for the little woman to go inside and make her men some supper." The thought of Hermione being a "little woman" to anyone is down right hysterical. Please correct me if I am wrong but it seems that Hermione is not as confident in her realtionships as she seems. Her relationship with Severus seemed to have her completely satisfied but, she admitted to Lucius that her most recent tryst lest her feeling empty. I have to ask is that because she is falling love with Lucius now? Or... Is she not happy with the quality or lack of emotions that Severus is willing to give her? that bieng said, a huge THANK YOU for hope of what 15 chapters can hold. I am in awe of your work as usual. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Tenar10r on June 16, 2008
    Naughty!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 16, 2008
    Hermione is a rather stubborn witch isn't she? I love the word play between the three of them. Its flows along very well. I am looking forward to what comes next!!!! Another fantastic update, my friend.

    Lady B
    xoxoxo
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on June 16, 2008
    Hermione, what are you doing? This is Luci for gods sake! Climb on and have a ride! Silly girl...Great chapter doll!

    much love,

    V x
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  • From ANON - mariteri on June 16, 2008
    Marking territory? I am so glad you didn't have them make like dogs in this instance! LOL! Great job and please update soon.
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  • From carha on June 16, 2008
    Yay I was hasppy to wake up to a new chapter this morning. Great work hun. Looking forward to your next update
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  • From Anguloce on June 15, 2008
    mmmm...what more to ask for...an interesting setting, two gorgeous and highly fuckable wizards...divine. all i can ask for is more:)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 15, 2008
    Mhaaaa! I love this story! But I think Hermione it better of with Severus.... but Lucius i yummy too! Mha.... does she have to chose between them? Can't she have both?
    I love the way you write, it's simple and understandable yet very thrilling and fun! It's fantastic for someone who isn't english.
    I'm looking forward for the next chapter!
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  • From blondpierogi on June 15, 2008
    hey! I am loving the part 2 of the story!! its wonderful and brilliant!
    I cannot wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Angelbaby on June 15, 2008
    Yah Sev finally got some. Poor bloke had to listen to Lucius going on about his time with her and then when Sev gets her to bed Minerva shows up (that alone would dampen anyones fire). I still have no idea if I could choose between them myself. I mean Lucius is so gorgeous but Sev was my first love, ahh what's a girl to do. I love how your ideas are always fresh and fun. I've read so much fanfic that so many stories are now just told over and over. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ASwanson on June 15, 2008
    Love the story so far. I understand about the Severus thing, but I don't think I could get him out of my system. Think my husband might be jelous. Thank you so much for updating regularly. You give us just enough to keep us wanting more, and with you stories I definatly want more. Thanks! Please keep up the good work!
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  • From Terrie on June 15, 2008
    Hey, I was OK with the sex with Severus. I say she should keep both of them (ok,I'm greedy) as she's woman enough for both. The only problem is convincing them to share. Boy, I wish I had her problems. LOL
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  • From carha on June 14, 2008
    Wow, I lose my comp for 2 days and I come back to find 6 chapters up. This is great so far. Looking forward to seeing more. I know this a LM/HG story, but I'm still glad you put a little Severus in there. He deserves a happy ending too. Great work hun, Can't wait for your next update!
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