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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part 2: Nimue's Island

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From RhiannonoftheMoon on June 14, 2008
    I was so excited to see the second installment of Adventurous Hearts posted! I love the combination of adventure and smut. And now Hermione has a difficult choice: Severus or Lucius. Does she really have to choose? I'm sure she could manage both! ^_^; It's definitely worth a try.
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  • From ANON - Taylor on June 14, 2008
    I LOVE your stories. The only thing with me is, you're very sympathetic to Severus (which I 100% support) but, it makes me want Hermione to end up with him. Just...let him down gently...and get Sev a girl! :) Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on June 14, 2008
    Hello Lovely, this was a great chapter! I smiled cheekily when she got down with Sevvie LOL, and then felt a little bad for her when he pulled away quickly. Luci is all about the lovin' (we should know...) Anway darlin I had the worst day at work, and to come home to this was great! Even better than a naked Alex LOL (Ok, I exaggerated there) but it made my day a lot better! LOL,

    Lotsa love,

    Vic

    xx
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  • From on June 14, 2008
    Who would kill you for letting her have hot bathroom sex w/ Sev? Yummy! Of course, now she has to make it up to Lucius & give him some hot sex too :) As soon as I read your name, I read the story - never disappointed!
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  • From AlexandraMalfoy on June 14, 2008
    Snape_Godess, you are a Godess! Thank you so much for Part II. I swallowed the first and couldn't wait for the second. And now, here it is. I thought, okay, Lucius and Moine will struggle a bit, get their everyday life together, but what did you do? You wiped all of my perceptions away and painted a whole new picture, just as if you would have had a new canvas. YES, STRIKE!!!! I adore it. Its a cool new setting, an intriguing plot and what is best of all - it consists of two men: Lucius and Severus. Oh yes. Despite the zombies, I want to be in that castle with them. Who wouldn't?
    I can't wait to get my eyes on the update. Thank you so much.
    LOL, Alex

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  • From chickaboo on June 14, 2008
    Whooo. That little bathroom scene with Severus was kinda hot there. Nothing like a hot quickie eh? lol Great update, I can't wait to see what happens. I have a feeling thought that Lucius is going to decide to "help" Hermione in her exploring. lol I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on June 14, 2008
    You are one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction writers out in the world. Your plots are unique, the writing is good, and your ability to keep your readers on the edge of their seats. It's a joy to read your work and you deserve every bit of the praise I give you. Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!!! Please? Pretty please? With sugar on top? LOL!
    Oh by the way, I totally loved the way you set up the sex scene and the after guilt. Oh this is going to be good and messy.
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  • From Larrabee on June 14, 2008
    But what about Severus? Is she just going to lead him on? He loves her. And she would love him too if he was able to open himself up a bit more.

    I am confuzzled!
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  • From ANON - Shetan on June 14, 2008
    Another wonderful installment of this series. I wonder how a triad between Lucius, Severus and Hermione each different in their own way, yet complementing each other as a whole. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Raine on June 14, 2008
    brilliant.
    I haven't gotten to review for a while since my computers all wonky, but I'll take this one to say I LOVE the idea of a three part story. It's a promise that there's always more and I nearly live off of your writing.

    Keep posting!
    -Raine
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 14, 2008
    Of course I know whats next!! I won't give it away though *grins mischieviously*

    I'm thinking you write some of the hottest sex scenes on this site, really, i am not a huge Sev fan, you know this, but when you write him...well, he can't get naked fast enough...LMAO.

    Fantastic writing as always!!!

    Lady Blue Eyes -
    xoxoxo


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  • From ANON - kymmy on June 13, 2008
    I really like the re-write. I thought the 1st version was pretty good, but this is so much better with all the additional info and story line. You've got such a good concept, I can't wait to see where you go with it. I hope they both win, you've got me pulling for Snape as well as Malfoy. Looking forward to those updates you've promised ;-) .
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  • From ANON - Jesse on June 13, 2008
    This is very good!! I love this series! Great job on everything! I hope we get a Lucius/Hermione/Severus scene! That would be great!! Can't wait for more
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  • From crinna on June 13, 2008

    ahhhh you have such an exciting and easy flowing writing stile. i just started reading and before i knew it i was at the end of chp.5 and desperate for more. now don't take this the wrong way. i love Lucius and Severus, but it is almost a shame that you are using HP characters. you could easily do this for a living. i would buy your books. i do illustrations and occasionally fan art. i would love to do one for this fic do you have a particular seen that you would like me to do? i don't offer to do illustrations much anymore because i don't have a lot of free time but i would love to do one for this fic. if you want to see some previous work . http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm161/crinna79/


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  • From mrsthedke on June 13, 2008
    I love it! Great start to part two and if it is anything like part one, I know I will LOVE it! I would say update soon, but I am certain that you will. I can't wait to see what happens with the walking dead on the island and how things shape up between the two men and our heroine! And can I add that I am just a bit jealous of Hermione right now??? *blush* lol
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