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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part 2: Nimue's Island

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From AlexandraMalfoy on June 29, 2008
    A tear in my eyes for it is over. For now. I'm really sooooo curious to get my eyes on part three - Merlin's tomb.
    I have to say, that I'm a bit heartbroken about Lucius feelings and his drawback. But Severus really must love her, maybe a bit too much. He's sacrifies himself for her love. How heroic! But will it last I wonder? It could kill him in the end.

    Oh I can't wait for the next. Thank you again.

    Please, take care!
    LOL, Alex
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 29, 2008
    Merlin's Tomb preview: that was such a teaser of a preview! TEASE!! LOL =)

    love,
    LB
    xoxo
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 29, 2008
    Harry is a right bastard!! if he truly was hermione's friend and not obsessed with death eaters and the dark lord after all these years he would listen to her, not judge her. I am glad that lucius did not go back to azkaban....it leaves the way open for them to reconcile at some point, stupid lucius for assuming he knows what hermione wants! Great ending, even if their relationship is not resolved...YET *evil grin* hehe =)

    love,
    LB
    xoxoxo
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  • From RhiannonoftheMoon on June 28, 2008
    Ha! I loved that she messed with them there at the end.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 28, 2008
    Chapter 14
    *Gasp* What a cliffhanger! Oh, Harry is so evil! GRRR! And Lucius misunderstanding everything... ghaaaaa, that is just so.... irritating! Now she has to convince him she loves him! And Lucius will probably just think that "Severus will be better for her..." Gha! Oh, I hope Hermione kicks Potter balls off. Mehehe...
    I will look forward to the next chapter!!! Take care!

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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 28, 2008
    Chapter 12
    SHE HAD THEM BOTH, SHE HAD THEM BOTH, SHE HAD THEM BOTH *Does a crazy little happy dance* and they kissed! Lucius and Severus kissed! Oh, goooooooods... that is soooooo incredible hoooooooooooooooooooooooot. Jeeeez, I get high only by reading it! I'm sooo jealous of Hermione! And those little sex-stories where just so funny :P That is a funny game indeed.. hehe...
    Loooooooooove the chapter!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 28, 2008
    chapter 11
    Yay! A lot new chapters! I have been busy reading another story so I haven't checked on this, but now I have a lot of chapters to read! Whii! Hm... I wouldn't want to know how Hermione is like when she has her period, with that temper... ah, well.. shouldn't she have it during this month when she is on the Island? Or is she one of those lucky girls who get's it every 35th day or something? Hehe, well, if she does gets it, I wouldn't like to be in Lucius' and Severus' clothes :P
    Severus really knows himself... but I would have to agree, I don't take he would be such a good husband.. at least not in canon, and perhaps this Snape isn't the most canon (that would probably be boring because then he would only remember what Hermione was like when she was 11 and never sleep with her because he wouldn't relise she had grown), but I think you keep him realistic, and that's enough for me. Really, if I wanted it canon, I would just read the HP-books :P

    Ou... I read your author's note and... I know I don't have anything to do with it because I don't know you or anything. But hearing about things like this just makes me... sad. Wars changes people... and not for the better... I hope you will feel better.
    take care
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 28, 2008
    Oh my! You have me in tears all the time here. That goodbye scene with Severus was heartbreaking. (You can always send him over for consolation, I will pay for shipping and handling.)

    But then again i was in tears when Evil-Auror-Harry took Lucius away. They will sort it out right? RIGHT??

    Oh, yes, there will be a third part. Whew. Just got to keep telling myself.
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  • From KellyJCR on June 28, 2008
    I feel so horrible for poor Severus. You have to cut the man a break. You had me in tears when he and Hermione had their sweet godbye. However I can see that Lucius is a bit slow on the updtake. One would think knowing her as he does that he would know how much see cares for Sverus on a platonic level. I am not sure I would even say platonic they seem so much closer. Although Lucius and her have a connection that can't be denied and seeing that with all the other nuances between them I would hope Lucius takes his head out of his ass. Gerat update I feel bad for Severus still. Can't wait for more.
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  • From shelagh on June 27, 2008
    Execellent work!!!!
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  • From ANON - ginnyginny on June 27, 2008
    that was terribly sad on so many levels...hermione saying goodbye to severus, and learning that he would have married her had she chosen. then, lucius misinterpreting the affection between hermione and snape, and his later removal from the island before hermione could talk to him. and harry, what a jerk. i can't wait to see hermione lay into her friend!!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 27, 2008
    I had to read this twice as i was not in the right frame of mind to read it the first time =) i just have to say that Severus is a very deep feeling person, and Hermione is very lucky to have a friend like him. As for Lucius, i just want to smack him on the back of the head for assuming things. As usual he's got it completely wrong and needs to be guided in the fine arts of love and communication. Harry was a complete tosser!! There was no need to be practically gleeful about arresting a wizard that risked his own life to save a supposed best friend of his. Brilliant as usual!!

    Also, thanks for listening earlier.....just knowing someone's there to listen without judgement is enough to make me feel better!

    Love,
    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on June 27, 2008
    Oh god! *sobs* NOOOOOOO, Luci! Just as she said goodbye to Sev!

    Heartbreaking sweets!

    Hugs,

    V x
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 27, 2008
    Chapters 1-5: Zombies for appetizer (eeww, I didn't mean it that way), then we get Lucius and Severus heroically racing to save Hermione and then squaring off, not exactly against each other, but each letting the other know the strength of their committment to "Minute" (cute name). I can't imagine who will persevere to the finish line and who will fall. To be honest, if this turns into a threesome, I would be thrilled (and if you toss is some slash, all the better, although it looks like that isn't going to happen).

    The history of the island is very imaginative - I like it a lot. I hope the two wizards and Hermione release the spell on the island for everyone. This IS very adventurous.
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  • From jonelin on June 27, 2008
    oh, please let both of them get her!! poor sev. :(
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