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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part 2: Nimue's Island

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From AlexandraMalfoy on June 26, 2008
    Hello again,
    oh god I thought Sev was going to die. Thank you for not letting this happen. He is too sweet and a real pain in Lucius' arse. Or should I say Lu is a pain in Sev's arse? Oh I loved the morning scene. It was hilarious!
    It was a great chappy, as all others. Hope you didn't get too late.

    And sweety, you would be astonished what strangers can be helpful for. I wish strenght and love. Take care!
    LOL, Alex
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  • From ANON - Shetan on June 26, 2008
    Another marvellous chapter. I hope everything works out. Take Care
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  • From on June 26, 2008
    I came back to some great updates! As always, I adore the story - yummy sandwich scene *grins* I hope things are going better. I know, that's not good enough, but I don't know what else to say. Humanity isn't a lost cause - us humans just sometimes don't know what to say to make things better. *sending positive thoughts & warm fuzzies to you*
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on June 26, 2008
    This was a bloody brilliant chapter...Came home from work, been crying all day to find a new chapter =) Can't wait for more!

    Hugs,

    V x
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 26, 2008
    You scared me! I thought Severus might be pulling some kind of suicidal let-me-be-the-zombie
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on June 26, 2008
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I really do. I like Hermione's character, Sev's charcter (he is twisted isn't he?) and Lucius. It's full of great action and thought and it's loads of fun to read. Thank you for persisting with this, especially as you have so much other stuff on your plate. I hope (and pray) that things go well for you and with you. Thanks again for the great trilogy (even though I know we're only two-thirds done!).
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  • From jessirose85 on June 26, 2008
    You write fantastic stories..I hope you will not overwork yourself..keep up the great writing...look forward to more from you soon xxxx
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 26, 2008
    I love the easy comraderie between lucius and severus. they obviously respect each other and enjoy each other's friendship. Hermione, needs to stop running, because really who wants to end up in a tree with mindless zombies after them? oh and that reminds me, i saw a sticker some where with a great quote about zombies, it said "We may be friends but if zombies chase us, I am tripping your ass!" I think that applies here! LOL, another great chapter, and my favorite line was definteley Lucius "Sod off, I thought it was Hermione I was cuddling." I know i didn't get the line completely correct but you understand!!

    Love,
    Lady B
    xoxoxo
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  • From ANON - Jesse on June 25, 2008
    Holy Smokes Batman!! :) That was HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!! You did that fantastically!! Super job!!! I felt sorry for Severus though when he realized that Hermione loves Lucius. But who cares about that when you gave us that HOT scene!!! WOW!! I need a shower!! Great job!!! HOT HOT HOT!!
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  • From Clare1984 on June 25, 2008
    mmm, let's see, did I like it? That question is rhetorical right? I mean, bloody hell! I feel all funny now and I'm still blushing. As I was reading, I could swear the temperature was rising in the room but turns out it was just me! Of course, the finisher was that kiss - yeah, I'm done now. Seriously, how did you even manage to write that. You're just too good.

    Anyhoo, roll on the next chapter. I hope Hermione doesn't overthink what's happened and I can't wait to see what happens between her and Lucius (yum) next. Just exactly how long do they have left on the island? If Severus (double yum) is right and it is his last time with Hermione, what a way to go.
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 25, 2008
    I am watching the soccer championship and I missed the goal for Germany - I just missed it. I heard the fireworks going up outside and did not bother to stop reading for a second and turn my head towards the TV. You realize, that this is a HUGE compliment?



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  • From ANON - Darla on June 25, 2008
    WOW WOW WOW WOW that was a totally awesome chapter! nice and hot and steamy! keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on June 25, 2008
    This was a brilliant chapter...Sev fantasy is so naughty but I would love to see it played out LOL and Luci's is even better! I can imagine him in his robes, pale hair over one shoulder while I lick his earlobe and tell him all the naughty things I want to do to him =D. The threesome was hotter than hot! It was smokin, hehe.

    Hugs,

    V x
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  • From RavenElfwitch on June 25, 2008
    I think the only thing to say to that is *MEEP*
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  • From KellyJCR on June 25, 2008
    Thank you, thank you, thank you thank you. I have been waiting for that for so long. I have never read a threesome so well written. Knowing possibly that this could have been the last time for Severus to be with Hermione was a bit sad yet, it really uped the ante when you thought about what he must have been feeling. Thank you again I really adore this pairing and as usual you never disappoint. Can't wait for the update. Well done!!!
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