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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts Part 2: Nimue's Island

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Shetan on June 25, 2008
    Wow
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  • From Kooldragon400 on June 25, 2008
    Oh.....my.....goodness. I'm sure my underwear will have to be replaced now. That was the hottest thing I have read in a long time. Oh...she should totally stay with both of them. It's soooooo much hotter...
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  • From ASwanson on June 25, 2008
    I liked, I needed it after the day I've had. Sorry about everything.....I hope things work out.
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  • From luvlivsmile on June 25, 2008
    It's a shame what distance can do. I have a few friends in Iraq and I they come home different people. I don't claim to know what your going through but my prayers are with you. At least you have a creative mind and it gives you (and us) a place to go in hard times.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on June 25, 2008
    Loving it!
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  • From Terrie on June 24, 2008
    Wow!! Now I have to try to go to sleep. You do know it's hot enough in Texas already, right? I guess I'll turn the fan on high.
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  • From helenesnape on June 24, 2008
    I absolutely LOVE this story! I have been hooked on your writing for quite sometime and I thoroughly enjoyed The Temple. It got me antsy for the possiblity of a Death Eater sandwich. Your portrayal of Severus vs. Lucius is incredibly erotic and completely HOT. I'm eagerly anticipating how you'll be able to resolve Hermione's dilemma. Don't we all wish we could have Hermione's problems? I mean honestly, what woman in her right mind wouldn't want to be in between two sexy Slytherin men?

    I can't wait to read more! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ilke on June 24, 2008
    holy fuckng shit.
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  • From mrsthedke on June 24, 2008
    Chapter 12: OH MY F***ING GODS!!!!!

    ok.. now onto the real review... lol

    First off, I have to agree that there are few things better than a wet head of hair on a hot night. It really does help cool me... (i have WICKED long and thick hair) Also, why does it seem like men's clothes are more comfortable for bed? lol

    This is the second story I have read that has included a high Lucius and Severus, and while the other was HILARIOUS, this was just BRILLIANT! I LOVE seeing these two so relaxed that they are willing to play silly drinking games with Hermione. Also, how very Slytherin of them to use things that they KNOW she has done? lol Perfect! That entire conversation was better than most foreplay! I loved it! (and lol at Lucius getting sent off to get laid.. hahahaha)

    And at last, the lemonade is served! Lucius kissing her while Severus fondled her breasts? That was almost too much to bear! The two of them kissing her...caressing her...teasing her... OMG! Seriously! And then the real action begins... Every woman's fantasy is to have two men fawning over her and lavishing her with their attentions and I am SERIOUSLY jealous of Hermione! SERIOUSLY!!! Them both going down on her at the same time almost drove me insane! When they finally found their way inside of her concurrently I think I died a little. When they kissed over her shoulder, I an certain my heart stopped for a minute! How incredibly erotic! I think I need to hunt down two handsome wizards, get them high and drunk, and then let them have their way with me. lol

    I truly hope that this isn't the end of Severus and Hermione. She needs him in her life and I feel that he and Lucius are two totally different people who can offer her two separate things and feelings. Neither can give her what the other can and I don't think she would be happy with ONLY one or the other. And I really hope that these two don't break out into a duel over her. I don't think she would like that too much and it might force her hand into abandoning both of them. That would make no one happy. Perhaps this could be a semi permanent arrangement??? lol *wishful thinking*

    And what of these creatures who inhabit this island? I am sure we will learn more, but who cares with all the smut flying around! hahahah (kidding.. kinda)

    Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and can't wait to read it again when the next chapter comes out! (oh yeah. And I LOVED them bathing her and tucking her into bed. lol that was romantic!)
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  • From ANON - Cliobella on June 24, 2008
    WOW!! Your's was the very first fanfiction I ever read - it was "Draco's Dad" - and I have been hooked ever since. This one is amazing! Thank you.
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  • From chickaboo on June 24, 2008
    That was so so so good. But at the same time it was so bittersweet. Especially Severus's thought/knowledge that it would be his last time with her. It made my heart ache for him. But it was beautifully written. It was definitely a love scene more than a dirty smut scene, and for this story and the situation, it was definitely something that made it all the better. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on June 24, 2008
    Brava!!! There are no words!! This was well waited for and you did an excellent job at writing the threesome. All I can say is lucky,lucky girl that Hermione. BTW, I liked both Lucius' and Severus' sexual fantasies. Although between the two, I think Severus' is better. LMAO!
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  • From HarryPotterFan on June 24, 2008
    another great chapter. can't wait for the next one.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 24, 2008
    What else could a witch want besides two thoroughly aroused handsome men who would do anything for her (or should i say to her)? LOL, brilliantly written, as is your usual standard..... Can't wait for more!

    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From ANON - pumkin on June 23, 2008
    i hope things start to work out and make sense for you soon. i couldn't even imagine what your going trough but you sound very strong. my prayers are with you. thanks for a wonderful update. i can't wait to see what position you put them in next. update soon please.
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