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Reviews for When In Flight

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Severus1snape on July 14, 2015
    Omg nasty Gryffindors, winning is not everything!

    I love Snape in this, mute ha ha ha, even on paper, he is, SNAPE!

    I love love love Harry and his fetish for Malfoy
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  • From callistianstar on August 02, 2008
    That was most entertaining. I'm surprised at the actions of the Griffindors as I'm sure that their actions probably had nothing much to do with the war, but this was great. ("So there
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on July 12, 2008
    very cute story, nice to see someone other than the snake acting evil! lol
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 20, 2008
    Damn! Where was I when you posted this??? Oh, that's right I had left for a bit.

    This was GOOD, especially the scene with Harry & Draco doing the 'Porskoff Ploy'.
    Why, oh WHY, can't you do more fun stories like this??? It's been awhile since I've
    read a story that ACTUALLY had me wriggling in my seat with glee!

    ...and I noticed in your Profile, you said you've wrote fluff. Fluff?!? I haven't
    noticed anything fluffy from you lately, I think that would be a challenge JUST for
    you alone.

    Anyway, I'm still waiting on you to tackle a type of adventure story for our 2 boys.
    Maybe I'll get that scene where the boys fight back-to-back with wands ablazin'...

    ..in the meantime, I'm going to tackle the bed.
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  • From Christabell on June 14, 2008
    K, fantastic. I'm a bit in love with this one... I love how the Harry in my mind operates just as you write him, glaring and full of life and completely the Gryffindor he should be the moment he has the opportunity to confront a situation. Him and Draco mesh beautifully here, and that moment where Draco falls from the broom to Harry is just perfect.
    Amazing job - I love your longer works, but your oneshots always leaving me breathing a little heavier as I reach the end in some crazy whirlwind of amazing writing and perfectly depicted emotions :)
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  • From ANON - Graballz on June 14, 2008
    Ohhhhhh, my god, SO GOOD!!!!!! *applause* That was SO AMAZINGLY ADORABLE and hot and sexy and just...WOW!!! Yeah. Okay, so not a huge fan of Remus/Severus normally, but I have to admit...I kinda like silent!Snape in this. EXCELLENT reasoning for how they "didn't die" and all...VERY well done!

    SO CUTE with the explanation of the "thing" between Remus and Severus...a bottle of Firewhiskey to understand the rival...I was like, "Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh, I see where that's going!" so YAY! Nicely done with that!

    And when the students hexed Harry AND Draco, I was like, "Whaaaaaa?!??!?!?! NO WAY!!!" and then when that kid grabbed Draco, I was like, "Oh, he's gonna die...Harry's gonna kill him now..."

    The only thing I thought of when Harry was saving him was, "They've been on a broom together...Room of Requirement with the Fiendfyre..." and I kept waiting for a reference to that, but there was none, so I didn't know if that part of DH just didn't happen?

    I canNOT believe Harry told Snape to "give up any thoughts of a foursome"!!!!! I was like, *gasp* "SCANDALOUS!!!!" and if Harry was going to kill the kid for threatening Draco, Snape was going to kill Harry for THAT comment....I laughed SO HARD!

    and I normally don't like the whole "Draco wearing glasses" thing, but I must say that you pulled it off incredibly well. Points for you! (Although wall!sex and public!sex is always a good thing, and THAT was mind-bogglingly hot!!!)

    So yeah, LOVED IT!
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 13, 2008
    I sooo enjoyed that!!!!
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