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By : tigra9969
  • From thrnbrooke on June 24, 2008
    Can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2008
    first, I would just like to point out to you that you've posted the first chapter of your story three times as separate stories by mistake.
    I have no idea how that could happen, but it shouldn't be to hard to fix XD

    onwards to the chapter:
    I like what little of the plot you show in this first chapter, it seems like you have something great planned out.
    It was a little short and fast-paced however, and it din't quite set the stage for the story right away so you might have a little trouble catching the readers attention.

    Is Ayana an OC you've created yourself? I hope she'll continue to be the back-boned girl she seems to be...no offence to the J.Potter fans out there, but he deserves some bashing every once in a while for his behaviour XD

    Good work and I look forward to seeing the next chapter

    Ibe

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