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By : ColdWaterFairy
  • From ANON - margaritama on December 03, 2008
    yay! she's out....
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  • From ANON - Bella on December 03, 2008
    Darn! I'm glad she's out but I was really looking forward to a mutual masterbation scene while she was still stuck in the painting! Oh well, guess we'll just have to settle for good old-fashioned intercourse. Sigh.
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  • From smmz79 on December 03, 2008
    yaaaahhhh.... nice chap... ok so i am not sure that i am convinced that keller is in on this.... he did like hermione so why would he kidnap her and this helper seems awful wrapped up in willow so i am not sure that if it is keller he would not have been that upset about hermione unless he is mad that he had to do this to her maybe willow forced him to because she was getting to close... hmmm but blaise and the minister was there as well i think i am going to agree with ginny and look at the big picture because if it is not keller then we are definitely missing something... ooohhhh this is going to be good :-)... ok so how sweet of draco trying to get hermione out of the painting.... he really tried very hard so i wonder what she is going to do now? is she going to contact harry and ron which i think that she should do but still stay with draco bc they do not want anyone to know she is back bc then the attackers will be after her... of course they could use her as a plot to make them come out of their hiding... ok so astoria came by again, hmmm i am not sure that i am convinced of her innocence??? i guess we shall see... and draco got her out and they almost kissed hmmm wow i can not wait to read your next chap to see what happens and what harry and ron do and especially what happens with hermione and draco... i just love this story you have done a fabulous job and have written the suspense and esp the love scene perfectly!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2008
    Wow, this is amazing. I love your story.
    I just started it and read all the way through.
    It's so original and creative.
    I can't wait to read the next chapter.
    This is wonderful, Keep up the great work.
    Please update soon! :D
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  • From kazfeist on November 19, 2008
    Wonderful update...of course, Hermione's dream lover is sitting in his bedroom, yeah? I am even more interested in the mystery, though. Hopefully, Draco's Warded his living space so she won't get taken, again. Keep updating! :D

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  • From DaOnleeSam on November 19, 2008
    Loving this story. Update soon!
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  • From smmz79 on November 19, 2008
    well well what a great chap!!!! love it totally.... so i really like that draco has matured enough to not lash out at hermione when he felt the guilt from the incident with astoria.... and speaking of her... draco mentioned to hermione that no one has been to his apartment since the accident at pearls but astoria was she came to his apartment that very day... hmmmm interesting... also i like that draco did not want hermione to leave and that he was almost desperate to make her agree to stay.... so ginny had to resort to slytherin tactics to make harry and ron sleep but look when harry slept he woke up with a revelation... i wonder what it will be... so we are going to find out who the accomplice is wow... ok sooo hmmm that means we are going to find out who the guy is????? gosh i do not even know who to think??? but i think i may have to lean towards blaise, since i am trying to go for astoria to be in on this some how??? great job!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on November 19, 2008
    wow what a chap... i have been sooo busy i finally got over here to read this chap and i noticed that you updated yeahh... ok so i am not really sure what to make of the situation with harry i mean the reason that willow gave is a good cover... and wow draco boy does he not know how to make hermiones blood boil.. ok so on to the next chap
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  • From smmz79 on November 03, 2008
    OK so i have been soo busy and have not been able to read these two chaps and OMG is this first one good or what!!!! Holy crap we are getting so close i can feel it!!! when i read this chap i felt like i was sooo close to discovering who it was but then it would slip from me.... ok so it is obviously not coincidence that pearl and the art gallery guy are both dead... hmm some one really wants them out of the way.... ooohhh who is following draco and what happened to harry I like that he does not trust her because duh she is probably the one doing all of this stuff... i wonder who willow truly is.... like could she have a glamour??? and where is her art studio.... ok i am going to try to read the next chap but i may not be able to till tonight or tomm but i can not wait!!!!
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  • From kazfeist on October 31, 2008
    Have fun in Seattle...and I agree about Sage. Thanks for the update! :D
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  • From lafemxtina on October 30, 2008
    Personally I'd think it would be a turn on to seeing Draco in action but a turn off to consider doing the same with him at a later date if I was Hermoine. But great chapter
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  • From PixieStick on October 30, 2008
    I have really enjoyed this story so far, but I have to admit that this chapter bothered me a little. To have Draco having sex right in front of Hermione just seems so horrible.
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  • From revampedfallenangel on October 30, 2008
    it's amazing...please continue
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  • From chickaboo on October 30, 2008
    Really great update. For a second there I was waiting for Draco to accidentally moan Hermione's name. lol I can't wait for more!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 26, 2008
    I like the way you are having them come to care for one another in a new and imaginative way! And, I really like the mystery you have going. :-) Thank you and I look forward to your next update.

    Thanks! HG4eva
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