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By : ColdWaterFairy
  • From kazfeist on October 25, 2008
    Thanks so much for updating, and we get a cliffie, as well. :D
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  • From bananasforyou on October 06, 2008
    poor molly and draco.
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  • From kazfeist on October 05, 2008
    Thanks so much for the update....I am still very engrossed in this mystery, and I can't wait for the next piece of the puzzle. :D
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  • From smmz79 on October 04, 2008
    yeah another chap!!!! ok so draco and hermione are starting to realize they are having feelings for each other of course that was inevitable.... so draco is really trying to help her... why was he having a panic attack? memories maybe? ron was really procrastinating on telling his mom but really i could understand i mean hello it is his mom.... i was giggling at the part when harry and ginny arrived and mrs weasley asked about hermione and harry glared at ron and ron just ignored him... i thought that was funny for some reason i could just see the look in harrys eyes and ron looking anywhere but at harry... but ron did tell her of course i am not sure that he did it quite like harry thought he would but that is soooo ron... ok so we got a little glimpse of our mystery guy and girl... hmmm so the dead girl almost escaped well no wonder why willow was pissed at her man i would be too that girl could have ruined her little enterprise there.... so i keep thinking about astoria hmmm i am rather interested in why she is here i know you introduced her threw pansy but still??? ok so she does nothing that is an awful lot of free time on her hands what does she do with it all.... and daphne, hmmm?? so more on her she was really affected by what she saw and what happened during the war, she could have caught these girls because she felt that it was their fault that she is the way she is??? or maybe astoria is so upset about her sister that she is getting revenge on the people that she feels could have caused it??? and how convenient would that be if she was willow and she has been looking for hermiones pic and it is right under her nose??? but i would like to believe everything that she said to draco at lunch but i am not so sure??? so IF daphne or astoria is our willow then who is our mystery guy??? i mean that would line up well with blaise because they knew him in school and that could be the connection BUT what is blaises motive why would he do this?? what are the connection with the other girls were they ministry people maybe in the way of blaise becoming minister and that is why they are placed in these paintings??? i do not know i am having trouble thinking it is blaise i know he would do anything to get what he wants but i am not sure if he would do that??? I mean i am sure he would kill but this almost seems too involved for him?? hmmm well i think i am starting to confuse myself i can not wait till the next chap i am looking forward to more hints...
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  • From mmconnelly on October 04, 2008
    The new summary is great, another well done chapter!
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  • From Eilisbelle on September 28, 2008
    I am really enjoying your story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!! I have an idea of who the 'mystery wizard' is, but I"m not going to say it. I want to see if I'm right.
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  • From mmconnelly on September 28, 2008
    You've got a good start going here. I'm enjoying your plot line and how the mystery is playing out. Some minor concrit, you might want to consider changing your summary. The fact that you've said Hermione is stuck in a painting in the summary left me feeling somewhat flat during the first chapter because it pretty much gave away what the missing link was, and what would happen once it was resolved. In the second chapter you laid out that the mystery isn't so much as to where the girls are but who is putting them there, or who the accomplice is, and so the feeling from the first chapter was lost and my interest grew. You've done a good job of portraying Draco, I'm excited to see how his character developes and how Hermione continues to deal with the fact that he has changed.
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  • From ANON - Shetan on September 28, 2008
    I am really enjoying this, please update soon.
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  • From smmz79 on September 27, 2008
    Oh Wow what a great chap... first i would like to comment on the draco/hermione part of this chap: I liked it I like that you still have that tension between them that they had at school... a lot of fics just totally jump over that part and you have not you are making them face it head on of course they kind of have to she is stuck in a painting and he has said painting up in his bedroom.... ok next I think that harry is starting to pull things together while he is still slightly confused about all of the details i think that he is really starting to get it... oh and i think that art gallery manager is starting to smell awful fishy... hmmmm i was trying to switch the letters around in willow suntree to see what i could get it to spell i am trying to see if i can figure out who it is... in my last review i guessed percy sorry i could not come up with anyone so i threw him under the bus???? :-) wow astoria greengrass very nice i love what you did with her in this she is a really great character and i love the way you have written her, she seems to be dracos conscious... fabulous chap let me try this guessing thing again.... hmm i would say blaise but he seems to obvious... who is this rebecca i know she is taking over hermiones case but is she someone that we need to take notice of or is she just a filler... also what does astoria do as a living??? i am just wondering also what is the connection between all of these girls i mean i know hermione was thrown in there bc she was getting to close to the truth but what about the other girls i am not sure that this is just about some painter that wants to make more money i think this is about pay back... ok so i guess i do not have a guess right now but i can not wait to read more and try to piece this stuff together great job oh and i started reading the fallout it is great i really like it so far so thank you for the link.....
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  • From bananasforyou on September 27, 2008
    i totally adored your chap and do indeed want more!
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  • From chickaboo on September 27, 2008
    Yay I'm so happy you updated! That cliffy you left us with the time before was just cruel. lol Great update, I can't wait for more!!
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  • From kazfeist on September 27, 2008
    Thanks so much for updating! What a nice characterization of Astoria! In so many of the postwar fics, she's evil, so that Draco can leave her to be with Hermione. Thanks for making her human! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - Cardamom on September 23, 2008
    This piece is brilliant - I'll be watching it avidly for updates!
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  • From ANON - kat on August 27, 2008
    I love this story, its so unique and a really good read, looking forward to further chapters :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2008
    Such a good mystery, and I love a devious plot, please continue this!
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