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By : ColdWaterFairy
  • From LeftInnocenceBehind on August 03, 2008
    Aww, greg sort of reminds me of Dudley in the last book ^__^
    And what exactly did you mean by "moving the girls from the background"? As in, free movement within the painting, like other wizard portraits? (which now that I keep thinking on it seems like the right thing :-X )
    Looking forward to what he saw/is seeing!
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  • From ANON - iHeartDraco on August 03, 2008
    so interesting,cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - BabyV on August 03, 2008
    this is awesome. The best fanfic ever!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2008
    Hi this is a beautiful story I love draco in this
    What sent thim flying
    Please update soon.
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  • From smmz79 on August 02, 2008
    was that the magic words... did someone have to recognize her to free her???? ok great chap, so since you are waiting on your friend to catch up with you in your book how about updating again... i just have to know what happens to draco and if hermione pops out.... oh and i think the night auror at the door is the one that is helping the painter... bc he seemed really interested in what hermione had to say about it!!!!
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  • From margotlefaye on August 02, 2008
    Well, that answered my question about whether Willow was involved in what's going on or not. And the dinner was every bit as uncomfortable as I thought it would be. Interesting that it was Greg who had the crush on Hermione rather than Draco, and that he recognized her image in the painting because of it. But, will Draco understand that this is Hermione trapped in a painting rather than just an image of Hermione? And, will Hermione herself even know? Now I'm left wondering what's waiting for us over the edge of that cliff you left us on. As ever, I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more.
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  • From smmz79 on July 08, 2008
    nice chap... and a little aggressive smut with draco... poor ron and harry it has to be tough without hermione or at least worrying about her... I wonder who got her it had to be someone in the ministry hmmm... but no one really knew what she had found out right? i wonder at first i thought about keller but he is distraught as well he was in love with her??? hmmm ok update soon please i am looking for more hints.. :)
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  • From ANON - Lozenges on June 29, 2008
    Oh, I quite like this! I like your writing style and the plot is wonderfully creative. Your grammar could use some work but I'm sure this problem will be rendered nonexistent as soon as you find a Beta (what is really rather lovely as well as convenient is the fact that there is no way the *story* need be improved, just the grammar, and that can be easily fixed).

    I don't know if you have a LiveJournal account but I wish you would get one at least in order to post links to the updates over at this community called 'Dramione' (the URL is http://community.livejournal.com/dramione). I am not on AFF often and I would hate to lose track of this story.
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  • From risotto on June 29, 2008
    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From risotto on June 29, 2008
    Great story. Reading the next chapter now..
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  • From GummiGrapes on June 29, 2008
    Awesome story...I cant wait for the next chapter. Will Hermione start talking and will Harry or Ron figure out what happened her? ^_^ I just cant wait! ....
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  • From margotlefaye on June 28, 2008
    Wow, you've really got something along the lines of detective noire going on here. Not in the details--hard-boiled detective comes across a mystery and in solving it, usually either falls for the wrong kind of girl who he ends up having to send off to prison, or the right kind of girl who remains beyond his reach--so much as in the atmosphere of alienation and isolation, the sense that there are no happy endings, so much as matters drawing to a conclusion while life goes on. (I would not mind being proven wrong. *G*) Draco's one night stand is clearly not going to lead to anything other than convenient sex, and he doesn't even seem to want to renew his friendships from his school days. I predict a very awkward dinner with Pansy and Greg. Interesting that an original character has fallen for Hermione. I am curious as to where you will take that. Then again, I'm curious about a lot of things in this fic. You've answered my questions about what Draco was doing in the U.S, and given hints of how he's been changed, but all my other questions remain. I look forward to reading more, and learning the answers.
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  • From skydancer on June 28, 2008
    nice backstory fillout. really looking forward to ch.4!
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  • From margotlefaye on June 28, 2008
    No, I'm not disappointed, at all. You gave us more detail while deepening the mystery. I'm still dying for answers to the questions raised in the first chapter: Who was the person in Hermione's office who trapped her in the painting, and how did he or she know Hermione had twigged to what was going on? Is Willow Summertree knowingly involved with what's happening to these missing girls, or is someone using her paintings for his/her own dark purposes? Is that why her paintings are being stolen? With the addition of this new chapter, we now know why Draco was in new York, but what was he doing while he was there? How has he changed? Who was the creepy old lady who sold Draco the painting? It seems Hermione can't move, but is she conscious?

    So many questions, so little patience until the next chapter is posted. I'm sure you'll find a beta soon, but if not, I hope you won't wait too long to post the next chapter. You can always post now, and edit the chapters after a beta has gone through them. Although, if you are going to talk about Draco's real estate agent again, please call her a realty witch rather than a reality witch. Other than that...I'm looking forward to seeing this story unfold.
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  • From ANON - malfoysplaymate on June 25, 2008
    Wow your story is wonderful! I love mystery types! Oh, I really hope you update soon!
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