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By : sugypunk
  • From ANON - Tiffany on May 17, 2014
    Awesome story!!!
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  • From ANON - lilywilson on February 26, 2012
    i agree with the headmistress thing and then you had to go and mention the head prositute thing didnt you cos i got the mental image of mcgonagal as a prostitute... im loving the story by the way its cheering my sunday morning right up so thank you xo lily wilson
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  • From ANON - alessandra on August 07, 2011
    Hi, love love love this! It's been so long since an update, I hope it doesn't end there?? Well done but keep writing!!

    :) :)
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  • From ANON - magical on February 15, 2009
    I always love Draco & Hermione living in close quarters. It's more fun when they're professors! Update soon!
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  • From loolupe on October 30, 2008
    That was hot stuff! What is it about a wild shag in the library that makes me so crazy?!
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  • From CovenmasterOrion on October 26, 2008
    I am very intrigued by your story and I think your are doing a fabulous job portraying the various character's interactions. A few critiques would be to make sure that your grammer is correct and you aren't adding miscellaneous words to sentences. Also check your contraction you're and make sure you are not confusing it with the pronoun your. However, I am very fascinated by this story and I am looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - casey on October 25, 2008
    hahaha Hermione would have been mortified when Pince almost caught them at it :) lol
    Great chapter!
    Update soon plz!! :o)
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  • From bananasforyou on October 24, 2008
    fantastic!
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  • From kazfeist on October 24, 2008
    I'm so glad you updated...and a library scene is always a favorite...all that passion having to be tamped down to keep quiet...and thereby being even more intense. I can't wait to find out the rest of the mystery though. Once Hermione realizes HER cauldron was destroyed, I'm sure she'll try to figure out who wanted to kill her. Can't wait for more. :D
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  • From ilke on October 24, 2008
    Excellent sugylove! Love that he asked her out on a date at the end! And the tete-a-tete with McGonagall was priceless! Heh. Wonderful! I love the progression of this story and your telling of it! :)
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  • From blondpierogi on October 24, 2008
    oooh great chapter!!!
    hahah library sex is fun... :-D

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  • From bananasforyou on October 16, 2008
    i love it!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on October 16, 2008
    Congratulations on getting things back up and running. I've been through it, too, and I know your aggravation and sense of loss. Weird how you miss all that stuff you rarely look at, isn't it? Sigh... I am also really glad you are back to writing and that you are getting her back into the world again. Good job, Draco! Now, on to the happy stuff again. :-) At least for a chapter or two, lol. Thank you again! HG4eva
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  • From ilke on October 15, 2008
    Oh sugy! This is such a lovely story! I'm enjoying it so much. Your Draco is so tender and caring and yet, still Draco. I want him to give me a hug! LOL! Excellent writing my dear!
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  • From blondpierogi on October 15, 2008
    Awwies I am sooo glad that they were able to fix the computer. Ugh i know what you mean, i pay everything online. I just got my 1st check book last month, after going on for over 5 years without one. I like to do paperless billing, and I like to have trees around us thank you very much. LOL
    Anyways. I am soo happy that you are back! this story is Awesome! I love it. and this chapter was great!!! i want to know whats going to happen next. Are they going to get over this funk they are in and realize that they are good together.. hmm I hope.
    Keep up the Wonderful work!!!!!!!
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