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By : sugypunk
  • From kazfeist on October 15, 2008
    Thanks so much for updating....wondering if the chain Hermione had used for Draco's gift was distinctive, in any way, and also who's out to get her? Can't wait for the rest of the story. :D I know it's a bitch when the electronics go.
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  • From kazfeist on September 17, 2008
    I don't remember reading this update, so I'll review. Interesting plot tidbit: it was Hermione's cauldron that was destroyed. Is there a subplot sneaking around in the subtext? ;D Can't wait for more, but only on your timetable, of course.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on September 17, 2008
    Im glad to see you have updated! I was enjoying this story very much and was afraid you had abandoned it or some other catastrophe had struck. Glad you are back and planning to ride it out to the end.


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From ilke on September 17, 2008
    SUGYYYY! I honey! So good to see you again and great to read the next installment! And what is this? Mystery and intrigue at Hogwarts? I'm so curious! I can't wait!

    Great job luv!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 08, 2008
    This is reeeeeaally good! I can't w8 for the next update! Phwoar go u with the characters as well, keeping them very well written. Started reading this tonite and didn't stop until I'd finished. Thats how gd it is. :D Keep it up.
    V xxx
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  • From kazfeist on August 02, 2008
    Hello! I tried to find your email addy, but you've got it hidden. Anyway, in Ch 12, you have 'it's prey' instead of 'its prey' (where Draco's on the bed with her) and you have 'studnets' instead of 'students' right at the very end. I would have sent this privately, but I couldn't. Can't wait for the rest! :D
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  • From kazfeist on August 02, 2008
    Wonderful chapter, Sug! But I'll PM you about a couple typos, yeah? Poor Hermione! I hope the parents won't take legal recourse...or is that how the rest of the story is going to go? :D
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on August 01, 2008
    That was an insane chapter, Hotttt lemon, the chemistry between your characters is very well designed, and i just cant help wonder what will be the headmistress' reaction to these two getting love dovey. I hope Hermione handles it well, she has been known to over think things and make alot of mistakes in her choices. But so far so godd, Please keep up the good work, and please keep the updates rolling.
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  • From Given2Fly on August 01, 2008
    *hands you a Draco sized and shaped cookie*



    See? I can be nice sometimes. LoL

    Excellent chapter, dearest. I look forward to seeing how Draco and Hermione interact when they meet again.

    *swoon*

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  • From blondpierogi on August 01, 2008
    wonderful chapter!!!
    keep up the great work!! cannot wait for the next one!
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  • From PotterEntourage on August 01, 2008
    No way that was your first sex scene, NO WAY! *standing ovation*
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on July 26, 2008
    This story is sweet, and has alot of drama and potential, so please keep the raw emotion coming as well as the chapters, and keep up the great work. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2008
    i think u should update like now lol
    but yeah i cant wait till u do
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  • From ANON - nekopilot02 on July 20, 2008
    i really like this story, the plot is nicely and spicy-ly (totally not a word) written though i rue the cliff hanger in chpt. 11 T.T, Draco and Hermione stay true to the books yet have unique mature quality to them. altogether wonderful ^.^
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  • From kazfeist on July 19, 2008
    Well, there's a time and place for everything....even 'not so honorable' things. :D
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