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Reviews for The Adult World

By : sugypunk
  • From Given2Fly on July 19, 2008
    *sniffle*


    How sad! I definitely didn't see the death part coming. How sad! MOST is forgiven...until next chapter. Then we'll see if you get life sized Draco cookies or not. LoL!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 19, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story. I somehow missed an update, so I just got to read two and as a very impatient person that was a good thing. I am so glad I didn't have to wait to see that she was okay. I hope Hermione isn't blamed for the student's death (so sad btw) even though I figure the girl's parents will do so. And, I love Draco for trying to say no; very honorable and sweet. But, I love love love him for giving in finally. ;-) I can't wait for the next update! Thank you. HG4eva
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  • From ilke on July 19, 2008
    Hey girl! So, I just went back and read my reviews so I could remember what I had written before and what you were referring to in your end notes, and I came across the head butting reference. And then I had a head butt too! Me thinks we are subconsciously influencing each other! What a hoot! Great minds and all that...

    I really dig The Adult World. This last chapter was a hard with the girl dying. That seems like the kinda thing that can crush a person with guilt, even if it wasn't their fault exactly. But it was well written and of course sex is hanging in the air. (You totally did what everyone is always yelling at me for - huge ass cliffhanger! But, I don't know, it often feels like the right place to stop for me, and now I feel like I have a partner in crime.) Keep up the good work. The next chapter promises to be HOT!
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  • From Gertie on July 12, 2008
    I think you should leave Trevor's name as is. Almost as if they were fated together. Is that too gushy? I love that Malfoy pulled his wand on her. I love this story and can't wait to see where it goes.
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  • From Given2Fly on July 11, 2008
    Okay, so you're just evil. That's all there is to that. LoL Seriously...how can you do this to me?!?!?! *sigh* Just update again soon, dearest and all will be forgiven! ^__~
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  • From ilke on July 11, 2008
    OH MY GOD! What? What happened? IOh crap, you've got me scared. There were so many wonderful parts to this chapter, and no all I can think of is what made Draco's blood run cold. Shit! I'm going to have to go back and find them again and leave you another review. It is a wonderful story!
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  • From HarryPotterFan on July 11, 2008
    Don't leave it like that. Please update soon! This is a great story.
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  • From kazfeist on July 11, 2008
    Firstly, I vote for keeping Neville's amour's name to be Trevor. I mean, it might be the reason he hooked up with him in the first place, no? Trevor holds a special place in Neville's heart, being his familiar, and all. So, I say, keep it. Nextly, the make-up scene was fine. I just can't wait to see if Amanda's ok. :D
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  • From kazfeist on July 11, 2008
    Glad Hermione got out of that with her skin and virtue intact! And goodonya for having Draco do the honorable thing. :D
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  • From kazfeist on July 11, 2008
    A lovely couple of chapters....can't wait to see what the holidays bring. :D
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  • From kazfeist on July 11, 2008
    And so it begins! ;)
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  • From kazfeist on July 11, 2008
    Well, this looks quite good, as a first couple of chapters! Liked the premise, and of course the tension was fine. I look forward to seeing how you develop the story. :D
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  • From jessirose85 on July 11, 2008
    Leave the name as it is!! I think maybe the student got revenge...hope to read more soon as its a great story xxxx
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 02, 2008
    This is really good! I like the maturity they've both gained (slowly - ha ha ha) and the way they've been drawn together despite their best intentions. McGonagall is one smart witch. ;-) And, you are one good writer. Keep it up and please update again soon. Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From LydiaBright on July 01, 2008
    Oh I can't help it..oh I'm laughing so hard now. The word "elusive" eluded you! *rolls around giggling* Ahhhhhh my sides hurt now. Anyways, great chapter. I loved how after a crisis, Hermione jumped to the wrong conclusion, of course. Hoping to see more now that the inlaws are out of town!
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