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By : sugypunk
  • From Gertie on July 01, 2008
    I am really loving this story, and keep letting these excited giggles out while I read. I can't wait to see what happens. (and my inlaws are only about 10% evil, but I feel for you)
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on July 01, 2008
    I really like this, I dont know if Ive reviewed it before now or not...I sometimes forget...anyhoo, lovely story!!!

    Happy Writing!
    ~SG~
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  • From Given2Fly on July 01, 2008
    Ahhh...I've always loved a "selfless" Draco. It's so much nicer than a "spoiled-little-rich-pureblooded-snot-nosed-git". Definitely know about the in-law thing too...although I have to admit, it's mostly my sister-in-law. LLC!!!

    Anyway, keep up the good work, dearest! Look forward to the next update!
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  • From ilke on July 01, 2008
    great chapter! I'm so glad they are stuck together at Hogwarts and will have to deal with their misunderstanding. Can't wait for more, more, more!
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  • From LydiaBright on June 27, 2008
    Enjoying it thus far, I like the idea and the fact that you've made the older teachers a bit more real by having them cooped up in a school all year wanting to get out some sexual frustration. The kiss in chapter 8...ahh, that was perfect. Having Draco apparate back was so well done.

    Must not let the editor in me get out...must not. I swear that's going to become my new mantra. ARGH. Psst, it's elusive. :D *flees from angry writers*
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  • From jessysgirl on June 26, 2008
    This story makes me so happy. The kiss was electrifying! So, I just knew that Draco was going to kidnap her away to Malfoy Manor and ravage her body on his green and silver silk-covered mahogany four-poster bed to slake his uncontrollable lust for her slender, yet lush body. What a naughty boy. Whoa! See? It's all your fault. Your story has unleashed my imagination. But can you really blame me for it? I mean, come on, look at him! So tall, so blonde, so fictional. *sighs* Crap! There I go again.
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  • From skydancer on June 26, 2008
    lol....there should be a special warning just for the inclusions of images of McGonagall in a g-string, holding a bullwhip... *shudder...* *giggles and ducks as a transfigured cream pie flies over my head..."Sorry Professor!"*
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  • From Given2Fly on June 26, 2008
    Fabulous!! There's mabsolutely NOTHING wrong with long chapters! LoL

    Update soon!!!
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  • From ilke on June 26, 2008
    What a totally excellent first scene! It made my stomach flip-flop just from reading! If he hadn't apparated away, paced, and then come back it wouldn't have worked nearly as well. Loved the pink goo scene. Super duper loved the stone. I also really like the way you write Neville. He is so...so....(damn, I can't think of the right word), well, I like his personality. He seems comfortable. The book presents were great too. I've been trying to think of what my Hr and D are going to get each other, if anything and I'm coming up blank. Anyway, great job. Man, a kiss and now they are at least 2 weeks away from seeing each other! Torture.
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  • From blondpierogi on June 26, 2008
    hello. this story is wonderful...
    keep up the great work. I really enjoyed chapter 8! great job!!1
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  • From ANON - oztan on June 24, 2008
    THIS IS REALLY GOOD.
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  • From ilke on June 24, 2008
    LOL. head prostitute! That's funny. well, this was great and I want know what his boggart is, and he seems ready to make a move on her....is he? is he? Can't wait!
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  • From ilke on June 24, 2008
    Ha! we both put Draco having muggle lit in his collection. Like the Dickens - with I'd thought of that. :) Ohh and McGonnagal matching them is great! Love it, love it!
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  • From ilke on June 24, 2008
    that's fabulous! She head butt him. I'm a big fan of head butts myself. I have an exceptionally hard skull. Okay, off topic, sorry. I loved when she said I think I made a mistake. Not surprised you named the chapter after it. but man, i wanted them to kiss.... good job!
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  • From ilke on June 24, 2008
    ooh I can feel her squirming in her seat!
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